Because of the global economy, many goods including. what we use daily produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. to what extend do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

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Because of the global economy, many goods including. what we use daily produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. to what extend do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

The importance of the global economy, many goods including we use daily products by other countries, which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked controversy over the potential of this trends is an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that the upside of imitating celebrities are instruments indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. This essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide a well-weighted conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the global economy, many goods including we use daily produced by other countries is unreservedly silent, but the most conspicuous one lies fact that that advantage. Therefore, it is vital time to appreciate both the significance of the global economy, many goods including overall amelioration of society.

However, it has some various who choose to think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint, which can certainly overwhelm substantial influence on the global including, many goods including? Nevertheless. The contradiction is rooted in the fact that disadvantage, hence, it is apparent that the downside of the4 the global economy, many goods including cannot be ignored.

The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of the global economy, many goods including we use daily produced by the other countries have to be transported for a long distance. While it is evident it has various benefits, although its deleterious effect cannot be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: upsurged
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Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Suggestion: these
...arked controversy over the potential of this trends is an integral part of the socie...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44573643411 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08904029461 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335296506729 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130166273511 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128723466361 0.071462118173 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222237132496 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959493056347 0.0609392437508 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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