Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
people regard rules and obligation as an essential part of their life more and more, obey and follow of specific rules are common issue in both developed country and the poor country as well. in this regard, some people hold the view that there are stric rules in society and young people cannot obey them, while maintain the opposite view and say stric rules may be necessary in the society.in my opinion, the latter point carries more weight. I will try to examine my reasons as follows.
the first reason that should be stated here is that rules resemble a map, will steer clear obstacle in the beginning of the young people's long journay. some people would like to be up to date as to the current rules that help to improve the humans activities in daliy living. again, some people would like to be exposed to the new things to make them achieving profestional in oder to succeed in life. if there were stric rules in the society, people cannot access to these prmitive element which are necesseray for everyone. I have been noticed that discriminating rules in this communicativee world could enrich people view, make them feel more informed, fulfill their communication between others and be helpfull to arousing their criusity. finally, in the community where there are appropriate rules, young people would obey them, and are more apt to prosperity.
another subtle point is that the quality and quantiny of rules indicate the level of the country. if one country want to achieve better recognition in the world, it should adopt rules which paly important rules in the community. technological progress is certain cause fo this purpose. in the past our parents did not access to the information as teenagers nowadays have. therefore, the senario have been changed alot and government should consider its priority in adopting the rules in particular for younger. another cause for this purpose is the type of political power which govern the society. a small example may give some light to this point, my parents grew up under communist regim whose main characteristic is sencure. this sencure prohibited them to speak up their mind in public. also, strict rules must be obyed, othewise the could have been seriously punished. However, we live in a democratic environment that cannot possibly be compared with the pressure of the communist regim.
in conclusion, taking all into account, government should passing reasonable rules, not strict rule, in the community because only in this way young people can follow and obey those rules not are rational map for them, but leading to have democratic enmironment tather than rebellion people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05656108597 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53743698119 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545248868778 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2999799358 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190563951681 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540162825774 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487823219702 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134946963515 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486394998281 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.