public cash should be spent on promoting healthy life rather than treating illness.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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public cash should be spent on promoting healthy life rather than treating illness.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that health is very common thing in human being life as well as public cash must spend on heathy life styles but also it would promote money for health so it might beneficial for all the public people more than treating pay on the diseases.I am fully agree with this assertion.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

To begin with,in these days adolescent have very curious about their health as far as they doing a lots of exercise such as running,walking,

jumping,out games and so much other thing.I think that youth can do exercise in their whole life than even who could not facing the problem of any diseases.For instance, obesity, low pressure,heart,anxiety,high pressure and

so on.After that,they should easily focus their on modules that 's why I suggest public money can promoting to the healthy life.

Moving towards,first and foremost,government should invest payment on the food because youngster would eat the health

diet in their daily routine so it should be benefits for their health.Moreover,todays there are

several gym available for the fitness.when youth can avoid the junk food.For example,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extra.Lastly,who must need check the

medical in every year like as any illness will be starting that doctor should easily treating as without any fear relate to they may live nor no on the planet.

All said and done,I reckon health is backbone in part of life than today primitive ave very aware about their health life style including they do plethora activities and follow the healthy diet.

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2109375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51932964531 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.364011179 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.5 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.75 7.06120827912 520% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201991642834 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127584946365 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039726618321 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806599712818 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588640024209 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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