What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The majority of parents love their children and can do everything for them. This love is the same even if the child does not behave nice all the time. Although, there are some characteristics, that they would like to see on their kids. Honesty and discipline are two of the most essential qualities that a young person should have and these values have remained important through times and times.
First, an honest son or daughter means better communication between the members of a family.
A parent appreciates a lot when his child tell him the truth, because he knows his problems and can solve them more easily. Moreover, parents are very stressed when their children are sad and they do not know the reason for that. For example, when my little brother went to school for the first time, he was very scary because the other children used to laugh at him. So everyday, he returned at home and did not speak to anyone.This strange behaviour made my mother to have depression as she did not know why her young boy is so sad. But, the day he spoke to her everything was changed and now we are a happy family again.
Second, discipline is one of the most important values for a child as it is easier for parents to handle them. Parents love to learn new things to their children but they are very tired to repeat the same things everytime. If a child has discipline, he will learn the new thing immediately and will not forget it. For instance, every night parents tell their childrent to not forget to wash their teeth. Imagine, how easy will be their life, if a child wash their teeth everyday without the need of a reminder.
To sum up, honesty and discipline are two very important qualities that every parent hope for their children. These two values were important for my parents and they will important for me when I have children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68882175227 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39971977444 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8786093549 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2941176471 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113248392901 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407071832441 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533354290028 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779727483725 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494235583206 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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