Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Parents are the first teacher of their children and also responsible for teaching of basic code of conduct although schools are places which can modified for better existing good manners of children. There is no sole responsibility of school teachers to make their children better human in their surroundings.
From the very beginning of life, parents try to give the best things to their children including to be a good society member. Parents are the ones who firstly contact with the child since birth to pre-school age. They are people who teach the first words of a kid simultaneously the initial teacher of their kids. Therefore, parents are much more responsible in teaching and guiding their children to be a reliable person in the society which they lived.
When the kids reach the school-age, parents send their children to school, there is no doubt to teach by teacher how to behave in the public. Sometimes, children who have already taught by their parents have a little understanding of surroundings. On such occasion, teachers are responsible for making modification of existing behaviors and addition of necessary and better codes of conduct that should be followed in the society.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that the responsibility of parents making their children to be a smart person in society although teachers have the duty of correction of students’ behaviors as necessary when children reached school-age. If parents could teach their kids about the basic humble behavior in the early childhood and teachers can guide their students’ good manners at the school, children will become smarter and better contribution to the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89066659454 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485185185185 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5506651206 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219620967619 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103141361745 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424182412333 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157214991699 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171345930557 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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