TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there is no doubt that the society has changed drastically from the past, the rules compare to the past are quite different. some of them may seem as unreasonable, and some of them are acceptable to the society. To address my point, I will delve in the most patent reasons and examples to justify my point at agree with the statement that the rules may be too strict for young people.
First of all, comparing to the past, the elder would probably take the rules today as a piece of cake, for me, in the point of young generation, there are many restriction that place on the child can be modify. What comes in my mind is that many parents would restrict their child from having a pet and get a relationship with them. however, having a pet in your life would raise a sense of responsibility to live, and paying attention to taking care of the needs, which may shows a sense of sympathy and teach a child to love others, and knowing the pressure of a living. banning a child from having a pet to me is too stringent for young children.
Moving on, there are restrict rules in the foot in the past, children have to strangle their foot from growing bigger in my country, however, although the restriction nowadays is forbidden and people sees it as a terrible habit, we still have some quite simmilar restriction now. For example, people in the school are banning from wearing the colorful shoes and socks as uniform, which is a way of wasting money for the parent that asking children to wear all white/black shoes and the length of socks could not be longer that your ankle. people living in the world should have their own choice of their wearing, to ban to clothes is too restrict to follow.
Furthermore, from the traditional views, children are asking to stay at home and study for all day long without the opportunities to take part in entertaining activities. it could be easy to understand that why parents want their child to thrive in their study, however, the quest is unreasonable to take away their ability to manage their own time, and may cause they are not responsible to their lives.
Finally, in these case, nowadays there are still many stringent rules made from the parents in their family or the principal from the school for children to follow and obey. from the aforementioned points, I state my point on releasing some unreasonable rules for children to obey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, for example, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67840375587 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51907576062 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469483568075 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8999936125 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.357142857 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129996229949 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516359791048 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500994521692 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078661229574 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513909088943 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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