Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer game is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them
Some may argue that computer games are innovation of the techonlogy, I , however believe that they are the waste of time. Therefore children should not be allowed to play them.
To begin with, education is the important thing to be focused for the children, They should not waste their important time on computer games. whenever, children indulge on palying games on the computer, it is less likely to manage the time for study. For example when I was studing my high school on class 12, I used to play Candy Crush Saga a lot, just to complete the level. I was so much addicted to the game that whenever I had time, I used to play it. Finally my marks on class 12 was consistantly poor than grade 11.
Similarly, computer games make children lazy. The importance of the outdoor games will attenuate when children are addicted for the computer games. In the 90's I used to play different types of outdoor games with my friends. It helped me to enhance my communication skills and moreover I was fit and healthy. But, these days children are not much sociable when they are addicted to the computer games. Hence, it's only the waste of time.
Some may argue that computer games allow the children to more utilize their time by appropriate scheduling and only use it for the source of entertainment. But, once the children engage on such activities, it is quite difficult for them to leave the games without completing the level. For example my nephew, who is studing in class 6 asks me to play game in computer for some minutes. but when he can not complete the level, he insists me to give time to play. It is better to persaude the children to play the outdoor and indoor real life games rathen than these virtual computer games.
Thus, for the points mentioned above, children should not be allowed to play the computer games, as it is a waste of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
Some may argue that computer games are innovation of t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ames are innovation of the techonlogy, I , however believe that they are the waste...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...elieve that they are the waste of time. Therefore children should not be allowed to play ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whenever
...their important time on computer games. whenever, children indulge on palying games on t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...whenever I had time, I used to play it. Finally my marks on class 12 was consistantly p...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...its only the waste of time. Some may argue that computer games allow the children ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...play game in computer for some minutes. but when he can not complete the level, he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59459459459 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44038975766 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468468468468 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7186444599 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5263157895 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390615748923 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14775726853 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106450177891 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2973959141 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766694149674 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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