The line graph and bar chart provide information about UK visitors from some abroad countries and knowledges about UK citizens who travel overseas.
As line graph shows, UK people had visited another countries more than visitors who had come for visiting the UK from 1979 to 1999. Also, line graph illustrates that at the beginning of 1979 there is a marginal differences between these two groups. However, clearly by comparing the curves it is obvious that there is a great difference between two groups of visitors after 1980. Obviously, there is a marginal decrease in number of both visitors between 1984 and 1989 in both curves.
The bar chart illustrates that the most popular country for UK residents was France and the less popular place was turkey in 1999. Spain,USA, and Greece are in their priority after France respectively and there is a marginal difference between France and Spain popularity among UK visitors.
All in all, by looking at two charts, we see that the UK people is much interested in traveling rather than other nationalities and France has the first rank in UK people for traveling among other countries in terms of popularity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , USA
... popular place was turkey in 1999. Spain,USA, and Greece are in their priority after...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01546391753 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63851574395 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.352226548 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38477558011 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151923956869 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149246244418 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239642709528 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11501126596 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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