You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the process to book holiday apartment in Singapore as I shall be visiting there for one weeks in the beginning of March with my mother and aunt.
I am looking for a two bedroom house in a quiet neighbourhood close to the city center. Since my mother and her sister is quite elderly, they would not feel comfortable living in an area with too much crowd. In general, house with en-suite bathroom, modern kitchen facilities and touristic attractions in walking distance will be ideal.
I would request you to share an estimate for two weeks for the holiday accommodation as described above. please keep in mind that it is a budget trip that I am organizing for my mother's birthday, so I would not be able to afford any luxury options. is there any website where I can see the photos of available houses with relevant details, like address, facilities etc? please advice me some husing options if possible, and I will let you know if any of these are suitable.
Yours faithfully,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about the proces...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one week', 'a week', or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: one week; a week; weeks
...gapore as I shall be visiting there for one weeks in the beginning of March with my mothe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nning of March with my mother and aunt. I am looking for a two bedroom house in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ions in walking distance will be ideal. I would request you to share an estimate...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...liday accommodation as described above. please keep in mind that it is a budget trip t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...t be able to afford any luxury options. is there any website where I can see the p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
... details, like address, facilities etc? please advice me some husing options if possib...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se are suitable. Yours faithfully, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in general, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65175218279 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6104954323 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160934156431 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612541126879 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618319701856 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103601729083 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526270173738 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.