Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays it has become a common practice for children to use computers on a daily basis. But this has several detrimental effects on the health of youngsters as well as makes them more isolated from peers and friends. This essay will discuss some of these effects.
It has several impacts on their physical health. Firstly, staring at the screen for longer duration will impair vision, resulting in poor vision early in life. Secondly, sitting in the same position may cause problems like back pain, reduced metabolism, obesity, which may lead into severe life threatening diseases such as coronary heart disease, high blood pressure, stroke etc. In a recent study it has been shown that the rate of computers has increased at an alarming rate since the 2000’s and is expected to continue this way for the next decade.
However, the damage to the psychological health is even greater and parents should be greatly concerned about this issue. When children use computers they are exposed to many games and cartoons, that have attractive graphical effects. As a result, the children give up their free time that they could spend with their friend and spend time with these. This further leads to them being slowly isolated from the society into a world of virtual reality. Their emotional development becomes stinted and start living depressed life.
In conclusion, though there could be on positive effects of using computers everyday about the negative effect outweighs them due to impacts on physical and mental health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... on positive effects of using computers everyday about the negative effect outweighs the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.136 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43343378788 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6710870904 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124351850385 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424244680123 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450790344514 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856887131537 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350737362097 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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