6. The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
In modern life, many regions of the world witnessed a significant expanding in the discrepancy between the rich and poor. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by some useful measures.
Increasing the levels of poverty and wealth could lead to some main issues. One problem is the substantial rise in the criminal rate. many low-paid people, especially for citizens who are poverty-stricken often suffer from hardship and barely able to make ends meet. As a result, they are likely to embark on a life of crime to obtain money such as chug traffic-king, robbery and prostitution. Secondly, this trend has brought negative effects to the national economies. The poor will feel enviable with the wealthy as well as think the life is not fair. Therefore, they do not have motivation to make efforts to earn livings. it attributes to exacerbate the unemployment problems, leading to the economic downturn.
some solutions should be adopted to narrow this gap. Firstly, more funding from government is required to invest in education, build well-equipped schools in poor areas and slum areas in cities to enable children to acquire knowledge as well as provide scholarships for students who are high-fliers, this could help them to attend tertiary education and get qualifications. In addition, it is essential to create more vocational classes to train the poor to become skilled workers. Thanks to it, they will command high remunerations and immerse themselves by higher living conditions. More job opportunities mean the decrease in crime rates.
In conclusion, dealing with the problem at it roots, by expanding educational chances, the authorities would be able to reduce the gap between the wealthy and poor sectors of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26056338028 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95295554304 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.5618547165 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179187984805 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508501076682 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470956450576 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113901182203 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333051409536 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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