As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
technology is the application of scientific knowledge to solve practical problems. it makes work easier and faster. technology is of paramount importance in our today's world and is highly needed,not minding the teaming population of the world that keeps increasing on daily basis. The advent of technology has brought merit and demerit to the planet in which the merits supersede the demerit.
during the ancient days, human activities were done manually and is very stressful and damanding. For instance, the means of transportation is either by foot or the use of animals like;donkeys,camels,horses, which was very slow and also have limited areas that this means of transport can get to. Unlike now, that we have aeroplane,jets,vehicles,train,that can get to any part of the world. All these are possible due to the advent of technology.
Furthermore, the advent of technology has also made communication easier. The use of telephone has prevented a lot of stress that one will have to pass through by traveling over a long distnace just to deliver messages.
Though, technology has brought us some demerit like the development of nuclear weapon such as the atomic bomb that various nations of the world used against themselves during world war 1 and world war 2,killing millions of souls but this doesn't take away the significant merits we derive from technology. To say that reliance of technology deteriorate the ability for human to think is simply unacceptable. this is because humans are the one that operate and control any tecnnological equipment and make it to perform the required task.
In conclusion, the advent of technology has made the world more confortable to live by making work easier and faster than the use of manual process in the olden days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15224913495 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48942337328 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3701740242 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129101439291 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450488401237 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575739161546 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659268764834 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306856680577 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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