Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military
Government consist of set of bodies elected to govern the affairs of a country or state and in so doing, they must be up-to to the task of providing the needs of people but this needs need to be properly assessed and placed in order of importance before embarking on it. Arts and Military are important needs of citizens of a country and the two are of paramount importance but in my own view, investing on military is important and should always be far ahead than the investment that goes to art. Though, investment in art is also germane but that mean that we should now compare it to military. Military consist of the police, navy, air-force, soldier and other security bodies that are all over the country to ensure that the country is fully protected from both internal and external forces and this requires heavy funding so as to keep it active.
Every nation's security arsenal should be heavily funded for maximum protection of the country because the security issues going on in the world right now requires each nation to continue to invest in her military. For instance, In Nigeria, the issue of Boko Haram, Bandits and other killings in the country has made the government to form another security personnel in various states and this goes along with more funding with the sole aim of restoring peace to the country and making sure the life of people are protected.
Furthermore, the personnel involve in military are more important than that in art and they need to be taken care adequately for constant dedication to the task at hand and this requires funding by the government. Let's take for instance a situation in which those personnel are not adequately motivated, then this might lead to security issues in which those in art will not have that willingness to even continue with their normal activities.
The advent of past world wars and civil wars also made government of nations to take the military seriously than art.
Though, we can't ignore funding in art because art makes the earth to take a unique form, brings smile to the face of people and makes the earth a lovely place to live, all this should make the government to fund the government but not at the detriment of military.
In conclusion, both sectors are significant and should be well funded but the military should be taken serious as that is what makes a nation to be protected from external and internal forces and also considering the various arms that make up the military, this makes it to require more funding than art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46816089059 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440909090909 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5978020761 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.0 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 23.4991977007 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257771909284 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114652026971 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070513789899 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140387560619 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060785917164 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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