Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy?. What other things in life can make people happy?.
Money is one of the vital resources for human survival in this world. There is a contentious argument that having surplus amount of cash is the primary reason for a person's happiness. This essay will discuss the reasons for how money make a person happy and identify the alternative ways that bring joy in a person's life.
People identify money as the major way to have a joyous life due to multiple reasons. One of the reason is that, people can live a luxurious life and hassle-free if they are affluent. These wealthy individuals get to buy anything they desire from this world, for example, a mansion, branded cloths and jewelries, expensive cars, gadgets etcetera. Another reason is that, a persons status in the society is determined by the substantial amount of bank balance they have, which in turn means that, If someone is poor then they find it hard to have a social life despite the efforts they make. The journey of Mr Dirubai Ambani from rags to riches is an ideal example of the power that money holds in the society.
Conversely, being wealthy is not the only way to stay jubilant in this world. There are people who find tremendous joy through sharing and caring. One good illustration of this is the life of Dr Ravi, a physician in Tamil Nadu India. Although he hailed from poor family, he dedicated his life treating the poor and the needy in small villages in spite of receiving various high-salary job offers. Apart from this people live a joyous life by seeking happiness in the little moments happening around them. For example, binge-watching with family, sharing healthy humor, spending time with friends, going for a vacation etcetera are blissful memories that majority of the people prefer when compared to having a rich life.
To recapitulate, money is considered as the core reason for happiness by many people. This essay discussed two reasons for this which are; the desire among people to live a rich life and to maintain a social status. This essay also highlighted alternative ways to live a joyful life, which are helping each other and enjoying the little moments in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, then, apart from, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67397260274 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40774069147 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8989932827 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297043515193 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107356570902 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071748338913 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18913734582 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014740680519 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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