colonization on asteroids
The text mainly talks about the possible place to colonization, asteroids, since there are a numerous number ofthem in solar system which can be a better option to colonization istead of mars. In this way of thought, it presents three main arguments to substantiate its position. The professor, on the other hand, cast doubt on the reasons cited in the text, asserting that they have gret downsiddes.
First, the passage acclaims that since there is lower gravity, It issafer to land on a asteroids rather than mars or moon because of the presence of lower gravity force.The professor, on the contrary, rejects this idea, pointing out that when astronouts lives in a lower gravity they suffer from muscle losee and bone problems. So although it is easier to land and wake up from the land of the astroids, because of the which diseases, they people who might live on astroids land will suffer muscle losing and bone decreasing dethe metals from astensity.
Second, The reading claims that as ther are valuable resources of metals on the asteroids. mining metals as platinum and gold, rare on earth, are appealing for making colonaziation on asteroids.The lecture refutes this idea, stating that although the metal which could be found on asteroids earth are precious, binging back them to the earth is costly. Besides, the price of the metals are not constant. By increasing the supply of metals the price of it will decreaesd, amking the transfering asteroids from thhe asteroids unappealing for investorst.
Third, the passage mentions that as asteroids come near the earth they are closer to travel on them and come back to earth. In sharp contrast,the professor professes that even though asteroids which comes near earth are closer to move on, Its route is sophisticated and after a while goes long from the earth . Maybe its distance become near the distance of mars. so It is not plausible fro colonization on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is lower gravity, It issafer to land on a asteroids rather than mars or moon beca...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a asteroid' or simply 'asteroids'?
Suggestion: a asteroid; asteroids
...is lower gravity, It issafer to land on a asteroids rather than mars or moon because of the...
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... of the presence of lower gravity force.The professor, on the contrary, rejects thi...
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Suggestion: Mining
...e resources of metals on the asteroids. mining metals as platinum and gold, rare on ea...
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...g for making colonaziation on asteroids.The lecture refutes this idea, stating that...
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Suggestion: , the
...nd come back to earth. In sharp contrast,the professor professes that even though as...
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Suggestion: .
...d after a while goes long from the earth . Maybe its distance become near the dist...
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Suggestion: So
...tance become near the distance of mars. so It is not plausible fro colonization on...
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Suggestion: for
...istance of mars. so It is not plausible fro colonization on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, may, second, so, third, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00931677019 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64808880438 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9114777291 49.2860985944 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188019891746 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618441351175 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711408847391 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989198101636 0.162205337803 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051554996943 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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