Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Rajeev Sundarrajan, a resident of Lakeview colony, writing this letter on behalf of the residents to request a new sports centre in our territory.
Presently, there is a sports centre for younger children, which is utterly unsuitable for adults. As the centre is cramped and overcrowded by the younger children, we adults find it challenging to use this facility for our fitness.
We feel it would be grateful if the local council could build an extra sports centre in the open ground in our colony's centre. As this place is in the centre, I hope every adult in our territory could access it at their convenience. I would also suggest that you can construct a swimming pool and a football ground in this area.
As most people are becoming morbidly obese due to their sedentary lifestyle, this new sports centre could help them to overcome the fat-related problems and also help them to rejuvenate their mind and body.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Rajeev Sundarrajan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...children, we adults find it challenging to use this facility for our fitness. We fe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93714285714 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65975294234 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.988840208 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182167968871 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678888853217 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486815949345 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837935299664 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548267167432 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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