Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Millennials are only interested to get everything quickly and with minimum effort. People are preferring to do smart works instead of hard work. Although, smart work is a good quality to have, hard work will help us to pursue long term goals. Talking about realistic goals the Z generation only wants to achieve fame and recognition with minimal effort. Everyone wants to become a Ronaldo, but nobody recognises the hard work, determination is the factor that paid Ronald to achieve his ultimate fame.
Firstly, people have to understand that working on realistic goals is important because it helps a person to gain a well-settled future. For example, long-term goals such as Doctors, civil servants, engineers, CA’s have a settled future. Becoming one of the above listed is a difficult task and determination is necessary to achieve this position. Working on a realistic goal is very important to every individual. It does not matter if the goal is small or big. A true dedication will make sure you achieve heights.
Secondly, realistic goals offer a good income and status in society. Whether it a small business or big, whether it is a government job or a normal job, you have a well-defined and a fixed- source of income. The process of working on realistic goal always helps one to learn new things and overcome new hurdles. It can be a failure in the beginning, but we all know the quote practising makes a man perfect. Therefore, a true determination will make us better one day. Edison had to try 99 times to invent the electric bulb. Many people did not feel it was a realistic goal, but Edison himself felt that he should achieve this to establish a better world.
Although people argue that realistic goals are difficult to achieve and there are many ways to smartly get instant fame and recognition. Let us talk about the TikTok users in India. They have got the recognition in a short time. But when the government planned to ban TikTok in the country all the TikTok users, who had no other option have been searching for an alternate. They found Instagram reels as an alternative, but do they have any other platform if Instagram stops the reels?
People will definitely find another alternative but, imagine the situation of a person who does not want to lose fame. They do not have another option to carry their life and hence they may also commit suicides. But a well-settled person does not have to worry about any such things because he has a stable income and constantly working to achieve his goal will give him recognition one day. Mark Zuckerburg, Steve Jobs, Satya Nadella are great example to explain that instant recognition might make you feel great at that moment but, well planned and pursued goals always have a good future.
In conclusion, short term goals might bring fame and recognition but there is no guarantee that a person will achieve great fame in a short time. Things that are built-in hurry are always delicate and they may fall at any moment. Furthermore, achieve a realistic goal is a difficult task, but all it needs dedication, determination and enthusiasm to achieve it. There are many cases where people have got recognised by having a long term goal rather than working on short term goals. It is important for one to remember that long term goals give a slow recognition but the fame one can get lasts forever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...quickly and with minimum effort. People are preferring to do smart works instead of hard work....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2799.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 582.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80927835052 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62996012987 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462199312715 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8808149791 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.46875 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224500472946 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577808398841 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612498896599 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125495263205 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703618240952 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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