The following memo appeared in memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham college. The author has strong conception that current growing enrollment may stable over next fifty years. At one glance, Building Dormitories for student from current enrollment it may give agreement for given argument.The author's made an several assumption with unsupported evidences. Due to this, argument become weak argument.
Firstly, Author made solid assumption on the basis of current enrollment, over the next fifty year the situation may remain same. Even though for Current year enrollment graph may show increase but it has imagination or pictorial view of next fifty years. The author can't take into consideration of several factor such teaching faculty, education, may remain same for next few years. It may vary in both way such student may differ, the teaching staff may change.
Secondly, The Author assume that student face difficulty for off campus housing apartment. Whether Author really study the financial situation of each and every student. Even though the rates of off campus housing rate are increasing, the student may prefer in living this apartment with group, so it might be affordable to them.
Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Student may enroll in Buckingham college. This criteria of enrolling may differ in student. Even some student who really admired to get good education, good job they must prefer Education and teaching faculty.
To sum up with this, author's need to provide an sufficient evidence and answer for the following assumption then only Argument may become strong.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...t may give agreement for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with...
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Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ent for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with unsupported evi...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
... for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with unsupported evidences. Due to this...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... show increase but it has imagination or pictorial view of next fifty years. The ...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...al view of next fifty years. The author cant take into consideration of several fact...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several factors'.
Suggestion: several factors
... author cant take into consideration of several factor such teaching faculty, education, may r...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ordable to them. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Stu...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an dormitory' or simply 'Dormitories'?
Suggestion: an dormitory; Dormitories
...ordable to them. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Student may enr...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Student may enrol...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...udent may enroll in Buckingham college. This criteria of enrolling may differ in stu...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...m up with this, authors need to provide an sufficient evidence and answer for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, even so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.6327345309 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 258.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36821705426 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59606894051 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8054343814 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229857191916 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100292413497 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124806227011 0.0701772020484 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141645624019 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105780899108 0.0628817314937 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...t may give agreement for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with...
^^^
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ent for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with unsupported evi...
^^
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
... for given argument.The authors made an several assumption with unsupported evidences. Due to this...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... show increase but it has imagination or pictorial view of next fifty years. The ...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...al view of next fifty years. The author cant take into consideration of several fact...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several factors'.
Suggestion: several factors
... author cant take into consideration of several factor such teaching faculty, education, may r...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ordable to them. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Stu...
^^
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an dormitory' or simply 'Dormitories'?
Suggestion: an dormitory; Dormitories
...ordable to them. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Student may enr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. Lastly, By Building an Dormitories the author assume that Student may enrol...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...udent may enroll in Buckingham college. This criteria of enrolling may differ in stu...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...m up with this, authors need to provide an sufficient evidence and answer for the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, even so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.6327345309 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 258.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36821705426 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59606894051 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8054343814 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229857191916 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100292413497 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124806227011 0.0701772020484 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141645624019 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105780899108 0.0628817314937 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.