Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.
In recent times, senior high schoolers must devote their time to volunteering for a period of time in order to graduate. While I believe this requirement can exert numerous favorable impacts on individuals and society as a whole, students should not be obliged to do voluntary work.
Implementing obligatory volunteering in high schools will open various benefits to both individuals and society. From an individual's perspective, this incorporation can help them prepare for a future career. Specifically, vital soft skills such as communication and teamwork can be enhanced, throughwhich will also supply an abundance of hands-on experience. This wealth of practical knowledge can be an advantage for them in their pursuit of future jobs, securing their promotion prospects and higher income. On a societal level, an increasing number of volunteers necessitates the delivery of help to those in need, especially in natural disasters. Not only does this relieve the burden on authorities but it also strengthens social solidarity.
Despite the aforementioned reasons, voluntary work should not be made a compulsory graduate criterion. The value of volunteering is in the participant's willingness and the cognizance of their positive impacts on society when they devote themselves to help people. Hence, requiring students to volunteer will induce resistance as it goes against their will, thus discouraging them from appreciating the merits of volunteering. They might think that instead of performing voluntary tasks, it could have been used to study. Consequently, this not only indicates a waste of time and effort for students it also fails to contribute to society's benefits.
As mentioned above, incorporating mandatory volunteer as a graduate requirement allows a chance for students to improve their skills for future jobs and improve social uniformity. However, it is advisable that students should be free to choose to volunteer or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...devote their time to volunteering for a period of time in order to graduate. While I believe t...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...o both individuals and society. From an individuals perspective, this incorporation can hel...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'participants'' or 'participant's'?
Suggestion: participants'; participant's
...on. The value of volunteering is in the participants willingness and the cognizance of their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56375838926 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19097698661 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7137454163 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183935944779 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603585049078 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394273617249 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12584887755 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447367221779 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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