You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Lionti,
I am writing this letter in context to the presentation I have attended recently for “High Speed Pumps”. I would like to extend my knowledge and learnings to my colleagues with a presentation.
Let me describe you about the whole plan for conducting seminar. I am going to prepare a whole presentation to describe my experience about the training. My presentation will consist of PPT slides as well as images and thesis material in the form of PDF files.
I believe to cover all this information and operational training of this model in roundabout 2 hours of presentation. I would like to brief my counterparts about the whole engineering system of high speed pumps and their functionality for various applications. While understanding the working principle of these equipments, I will also make the session interactive with showing the demonstration and prototype working model of these pumps.
I would like to have your support to create awareness within our department and look forward to call up as many people as possible to share my experience. How about inviting our colleagues from other departments i.e. electrical, civil, piping and electronics whoever has worked upon this equipment earlier? Your suggestions are welcomed.
Looking forward to hearing back from you at the soonest.
Yours sincerely,
James.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12454301688 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8601090746 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225443264001 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777410323678 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546407882768 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113657009235 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534164538533 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.