You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish Write a letter to the admissions t

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.

Write a letter to the admissions tutor:

explain your position

apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.

ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

You do NOT need to write your own address.

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Lionti,
I am writing this letter in regard to the interview call received for the final semester subject statistics.
As per the schedule the invitation letter states that the final interview round has been scheduled on 21st September, 2021. However, due to prior commitments I am not in position to attend the interview on given time and date. As you are aware that we have several companies visiting our campus for job recruitment and Accenture company has selected me 2nd round of interview which has been planned on the same date.
Please accept my apologies for inconvenience caused due to non-availability on the mentioned date. I would like to request you and jury to postponed the interview by 1 day and re-schedule it on 22nd September, 2021 as per suitable time and available slots.
It would be much appreciated if you can let me know the details about face to face discussion round such as duration of the interview and any paper or computer based test need to be appeared by me. Will there be multiple rounds or single round in presence of several invigilators? This information will assist me in preparing well for the interview round.
Looking forward to hearing back from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
James

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2021'.
Suggestion: September 2021
...erview round has been scheduled on 21st September, 2021. However, due to prior commitments I am...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2021'.
Suggestion: September 2021
...iew by 1 day and re-schedule it on 22nd September, 2021 as per suitable time and available slot...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, such as, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80348018252 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5638533375 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206869128969 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072612547859 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423665352388 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115165398959 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317041491776 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.