Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Science and scientists played a very crucial role in human development . We come far ahead from our ancestors due to continuous researches done in diverse areas . Today’s human went to the moon and now we are planning for Mars. Over the period our research horizon increased and we have done a myriad of experiments . Among them some are evidently successful and some are total disasters bringing no value to human society . Therefore , in the contemporary world many people argue that governments should stop funding the research whose outcome is unclear , however the rest of people go averse to it . I see eye to eye with the central idea for the various reasons which will be elucidated in the following paragraph with an apt example .
To begin , research is not the only aspect which should only focus on , especially when research is not bound to produce appropriate results . The residents have other crucial needs like a better education system , transportation , water and food etc . At the cost of this previously stated crucial need , if the government funds the research department then it will not bring any good to the community of their nation. For instance , consider the country X who is heavily investing on the research on mass while their half of residents don’t are below poverty line and they hardly find healthy food and potable water to drink . It is pretty evident from the above example that this research investment which done make one nation to put in space competition by ignoring their nation requirement will not bring any advantage.
Moreover , every research has positive and negative outcomes . Without not knowing its possible consequences , investing money is like gambling with taxpayers money . For example , Abundance of nations invested money in research which promised to cure cancer . But after experiments completed and experiment started , it was identified that this medication definitely cures cancer but indulges in drugs which makes their body more prone to heart attack . Due to which this cure was declared cancelled and governments of many nations lost their money . Therefore , before investing government should form committee with an experts and scientist of their field which can predict possible outcome with their analysis power and reduce chances of wasting money of taxpayers.
On the logger's head , some critics will argue that Research is what leads to innovation. Everything we have or use today came from someone's research either directly as a consequent of the research or indirectly. For example, the invention of the microwave was done when scientists were researching microwaves for communication purposes . Hence, sometimes the Government should fund such research which might lead to innovations that help humanity.
Hammering the last nail , the decision to fund research is very complex and it depends upon a lot of factors. If the consequences of a research can be predicted and is positive, then the Government should fund them but if, the implications are negative or the consequences are unclear, then it might Government might be required to prevent funding such research. Hence, I mostly agree with the prompt and think that Government should not fund research with unclear consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2736.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26153846154 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80710079549 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2964650845 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.44 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256195992894 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736052315154 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529749582032 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152043187877 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339289971483 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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