The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language with outweigh the disadvantage To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

In today’s knowledge-based society, English is not only a commnuncational tool in a multicultural country like VietNam in particular and many countries in general but it is also the key to better career prospects. And there is often debate that English was recognized as a global language is undeniable. Personally, I fairly disagree with this notion and i would outline my reasons in this essay below.
To begin with, it is worth considering about the advantageous merits of English that bring to all aspects of life. English, which is considered as a global language can facilitate between different cultures, especially in range of fields such as diplomacy, industry, tourism, education, and science. It can also help people having the profound awareness of nation benefits which is stem from english’s values. Furthermore, it can also capture people’s attention and help access information and resources from the variety of sources and platforms, simultaneously, it can also increase the opportunities, competitiveness of individuals, firms in the global market, and reduce the language barriers.
By contrast, I would still side with those who think that English's benefits can not outweigh the disadvantages. To be specific, Threatening the diversity and identity of other languages and cultures is the primary reason that can lead to the discrimination of moral and custom values in one country. Also, The extension of english creates inequalities and disadvantages for non-native speakers in studying or researching, eventually in linguistic imperialism.
In conclusion, I was convinced that english is a significantly communicational language all over the world and have a undeniable fact that it will strengthen more and more relationships between countries apart from the disadvantageous merits.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, apart from, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60727272727 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44466337762 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6031710442 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224536049553 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866859833784 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053601752302 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126421616947 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037837029325 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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