THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD NOT FUND ANY SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH WHOSE CONSEQUENCES ARE UNCLEAR.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether the government should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. Indisputably, on some hand they are true that government should limit their fund but not to a great extent that they cannot perform the experiment. Nevertheless, scientist should try different experiments no matter what ever the consequences. Someone had truly said “Try and try until u get success”. Thus, I generally disagree with a claim that government should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear, and would likely agree that government should fund scientific research so that new inventions are carried out.
First of all, apart from few negative points there are many positive points. For instance let say a pharmaceutical company spends nearly 200 Crores on the invention of inhaler which is very useful for an asthama patient and that inhaler costs 200 Rs each. In this circumstance, obviously it is very helpful for funding in the scientific research which is very helpful to human nature. Consequently it is pretty obvious that scientific research many a times is very important for the world.
Furthermore, scientist should carry their research so that new invention are carried out, for e.g, Some pharmaceutical company has invented the vaccination of polio,HIVs,H1B1 virus etc, to carry out these experiment funding is required. Both common sense and experience have told us that without scientific research the world cant move forward. Hence all the evidence above demonstrates that government should fund scientific research, no matter what consequences the world has to face.
Admittedly, government should not fund on some of the scientific research, This is true especially when it comes to certain scientific research. In addition a research company produce some type of drug which is very harmful to human kind and they sell on the black market to gain some money, then these research lab should be seized with prior right. So that they cannot sell harmful drugs in the market. However the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that government should not fund the scientific research whose consequences are unclear. Because we cannot stop scientific research beacaue of some loose attempt by the rivalry scientific research company.
In conclusions, although whether the government should fund in scientific research or not without knowing their consequences. As along as some measurements are performed, or some areas are involved main conclusion still holds that government should fund scientific research without worrying about the consequences.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24295010846 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.1431670282 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110629067245 0.0880659088768 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0694143167028 0.0497285424764 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0281995661605 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108459869848 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0238611713666 0.0406280797675 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96495604697 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0173535791757 0.030933414821 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00433839479393 0.0016655270985 260% => OK
Determiners: 0.101952277657 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0347071583514 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216919739696 0.0148568991511 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2688.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.50847457627 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399515738499 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322033898305 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237288135593 0.200843997647 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164648910412 0.132149295362 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96495604697 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501210653753 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.4842550617 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7368421053 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7732644724 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.473684211 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.9402319358 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.55855855856 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570693474296 0.391690518653 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122988550174 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0867681100841 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550856633405 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153532584622 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230064834752 0.161403998019 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19932308161 0.0892212321368 223% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293791971148 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104803695284 0.0692045440612 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37710052362 0.275328986314 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174545193678 0.0653680567796 267% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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