Some people think that government should spend money exploring outer space. Other think that government should spend this money for our basic needs on earth. Which do you prefer?

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Some people think that government should spend money exploring outer space. Other think that government should spend this money for our basic needs on earth. Which do you prefer?

The word "space adventure" has captured a large number of people's heart. Many men have been attracted by the unknown world and have desire to live in space at some future time. Indeed, the universe is last and infinite un-explored region for human beings. Government should yearly allocate a substantial amount of budget to different realm in order to help them finance their activities. Two of the most important areas to which this budget should be dedicated are improving outer space and fulfilling basic needs on the earth. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, although meet the basic needs on earth can directly impact human's lives, exploring outer space can bring many advantages that in the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.

One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that by and large, it is established beyond doubt that one day natural resources in every planet will terminated and people run into a huge problem. Scientifically speaking, we all know that people are highly depend on natural resources and as research shown population are increasing day in day out. In this case, not only will amount of resources diminish or die out but also will put people into danger because various trials and tribulations come up with arising population. Delving further into the issue reveal that we cannot always rely on earth forever and other extra place should be available in order to rely on its resources. Also, with the development of technological advancement and new science spending money on discovering outer space will not have negative consequences. As a tangible example conducted in MIT research center, exploring outer space provide fertile ground for people to live on and experience new living conditions and US government spend enough money in this territory when it comes to first priority.

Another reason that is equally important if not more is that many job opportunities will provide for people in order to make a living. Broadly speaking, it goes without saying that we all need a well-paid job to flourish in our everyday lives. This concept play an important role in individuals' way of living throughout history. To put it in other word, living on outer space is not as convenient as on earth and with the supports of government vast majorities of people are required to work in different parts in order to make the situations better. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, needs of people on the earth is of the significant problems that government should take it into consideration. Indeed, without fulfil of people's needs hardly can people progress and push society forward. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.

To wrap it up, government all around the globe should take most important items into account when it comes to budget allocation. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that exploring outer space can be second natural resource for people because nothing in the earth last forever. Additionally, more job opportunities will create and provide fertile ground for people to make a living.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...apos;space adventure' has captured a large number of peoples heart. Many men have been attra...
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'terminate'
Suggestion: terminate
... natural resources in every planet will terminated and people run into a huge problem. Sci...
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...ish in our everyday lives. This concept play an important role in individuals way of...

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'by and large']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241554054054 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.16722972973 0.158904122519 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945945945946 0.0723426182421 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0658783783784 0.0435111971325 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320945945946 0.0277247811725 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130067567568 0.128828473217 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0540540540541 0.0370669169778 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85473399336 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337837837838 0.0208969081088 162% => OK
Particles: 0.00675675675676 0.00154638098197 437% => OK
Determiners: 0.0692567567568 0.128158765124 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304054054054 0.0158828679856 191% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101351351351 0.0114777025283 88% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3330.0 1645.83664459 202% => OK
No of words: 540.0 271.125827815 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16666666667 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.04852973271 119% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385185185185 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275925925926 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198148148148 0.187439937562 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140740740741 0.113142543107 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85473399336 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 145.348785872 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 63.0365263199 53.8517498576 117% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0529801325 176% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4782608696 21.7502111507 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3121057046 49.3711431718 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.782608696 132.220823453 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4782608696 21.7502111507 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.878197800319 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 51.0708534622 50.5018328374 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.6050955414 1.90840788429 84% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229265371332 0.549887131256 42% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893608927264 0.142949733639 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.067807596751 0.0787303798458 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439892030166 0.631733273073 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131506468687 0.139662658121 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767688745362 0.266732575781 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546474758158 0.103435571967 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398340316838 0.414875509568 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0410131930394 0.0530846634433 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164609655176 0.40443939384 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180510327694 0.0528353158467 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 4.33554083885 392% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 3.49668874172 372% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.2958057395 155% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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