Why go to university

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Why go to university?

In my opinion, going to university is essential nowadays, having collage education can effect on most aspects of people's lives impressively, for instance I think the college education gives more opportunity to find suitable jobs, furthermore it increase our social position in society and it influences on our personality in a good way.

With regard to that, technology is improving at any time, industries and companies need experts, to this end they employ educational(educated) people who has perfect profession in their demand fields, with these election they could be sure that their affairs will be done in best way.

Going to university also has good effect on our characters. I believe that being at university as a student or teacher teach us how to adapt ourselves to different people and hard situation because university is a small sample of society. In addition reading books and knowing (acquiring) knowledge make us wiser and more reasonable that can support us in our personal daily life.

in my point of view, on the other hand, university education mostly improves prestige and most people are significantly respectful to people who spend their time to obtain professional skills in university.
Overall, I think going to university has many good influence on our life and in these years any one need to graduate at university to have better chance to find satisfying job and social position in community.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96205692262 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0165192697 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.428571429 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 5.45110844103 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201590448341 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117060186041 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100281454005 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115913632751 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795961618651 0.0645574589148 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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