To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.
No one can ignore the important rule of professors in the education system. Without the professors there were be no students. Although I understand that professor has a vital rule in the quality of education. I have a different opinion that to improve the education system we have to spend money on more necessities like libraries and dorms or even cafeteria. The basis of my opinion is educational, social and personal.
Educationally, students need access to the internet and they need more text books.
students in the univeisitis are assigned to do many projects and paper work. the best place to get all the essential information is from libraris. students aslo need a quite place to concentrate and focus, libraries is the favarabole for most of them. to improve thw quality of education we should spend more money on building more libriaris an the univeristes or even supply the library with the best sources of information, that way we could have better students and consequently better education.
socially, univiristies should spend some of their money on building of cafertria or dorms. it is more convenient to have more than one cafertria in the campus. for instance, i remember when i was in the college there was only one cafeteia and i should walk for about 15 minutes to get my coffee, however if there are more than one cafeteria it will provide the chance to students to relax and communicate. students will use their extra time to eat food and drink something, they still have long day of learning. that way students dont have to waste their time going off campus searching for resturant or other coffee shope to eat.
in conclusion for the reason i mention above i encourage the univeristy to use the money on other important nessetes than increase the professor salaries. having library is the godd source ffor improving the quality of education. cafetria is another souse to help students get relaxed and continue their education process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97583081571 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76011264489 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519637462236 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9195851201 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138603790885 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454937360843 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679415248311 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779302223278 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449457479494 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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