According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the last year. Clearly, the content of these reviews is not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater quantity of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
Advertising is an important part to promote a film by whom people initially know about a movie though a film's success mostly depends on it's material. If the quality and content of a movie is liked by people than they will go to watch that movie and will review it in social media as it is the biggest platform to promote a movie.
Additionally, quality of movie make people interested to watch a movie more than one time and it also make a movie big hit. For example, their are many movies whoes casting hero and heroin are new and their advertising expense was also low but movie was big hit only because the content of the movie was liked by people.
In contrast, many superstar's big budget movie became flop even though their advertising budget was more than sufficient and off course hero himself a brand to promote his movie. People go to watch movie for some recreation and to get some hapiness which make them to expect some good content and if they do not find something upto the mark they give bad review and prevent their friends and family to watch that movie.
So, fewer people attended Super Screen movies because this movies did not give upto the mark exitement. Even incresing the advertising can not make movie hit if the content is not good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'films'' or 'film's'?
Suggestion: films'; film's
...e initially know about a movie though a films success mostly depends on its material....
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... a movie more than one time and it also make a movie big hit. For example, their are...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...also make a movie big hit. For example, their are many movies whoes casting hero and ...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...le attended Super Screen movies because this movies did not give upto the mark exite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 55.5748502994 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56140350877 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26818427279 2.78398813304 81% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 204.123752495 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9872432374 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.70786347227 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268127447029 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139495832789 0.0743258471296 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795762131851 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187435459586 0.128457276422 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653474246996 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.5979740519 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 98.500998004 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.