"According to a recent report from our marketing department , during the past year fewer people attended super screened- produced movies than in any other year . And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific super screen movies actually increased during the past year.Clearly the contents of this reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers.Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super screened should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching to reaching the public through advertising ."
From understanding, looking at our passage and findings brought to us from this above report from a marketing department , we could observe that they talking about the degree of penetration of the super-screen movie production company and suggesting to the fact that better ways on improving efficiently in enhancing the reviews to more potential and prospective viewers is to allocate a greater share of its budget in the coming year on advert with aim of reaching a more larger public and prospective clients.My response to this argument is quite strategical and more logical in remedy for this controversial situation but i also think further investigations and research questions need to be put in place in other to see more on how to tackle on this issue.
Firstly , in my opinion i will suggest the company to know first on how the competitiveness of his or her product that is super screen movie in the society, in which i mean he need to take into consideration whether he is dealing with a competitive market, monopoly , oligopoly or monopolistic market which varies from countries to countries hence cant really best know how to better suit the super screen movie production company before allocating a greater share of its budget in the next on the public for though advert is a great marketing strategy as a means of making well known your product , if other companies turn to more competitive of monopolistic, other criterion necessarily needs to be take into account .
Furthermore , it is also good though the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific super screen movies actually increase in the past years to always take surveys in the for on questionnaires or interviews in other to better understand the reasons for this decline which is being showing up itself in other to better understand the current situations and hence could make you understand that it is not a problem of advertisement but rather could be a problem of management efficiency of the working team and hence should be taken into consideration, We could also look up to the involvement in the society on the different types of super screen movie production company and not just limit ourselves to specific movies as being told in the argument , but rather look in a general view of the society wants and needs as far as the super screen movie production company is concern.This could be identified in the case of people in the past who loved more of the super screen movie production company looking at romantic movies and now turn to advocate more for action movies and if his company could no longer provide it to them efficiently, they turn to go to the next substitute depending on how the markets operate hence makes it importance for the company to look up to the variety of movies they provide.
Conclusively, if all this point are taken into consideration and the company still find it necessary to go into advert i will fully agree with them.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 506 350
No. of Characters: 2430 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.802 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.804 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 63.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.306 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.453 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.729 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.258 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, really, so, still, well, i mean, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 55.5748502994 169% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 504.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88293650794 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87849565981 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 705.55239521 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 126.0 22.8473053892 551% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 417.448424958 57.8364921388 722% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 615.25 119.503703932 515% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 126.0 23.324526521 540% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 5.70786347227 561% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258661605479 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135806095811 0.0743258471296 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091591202667 0.0701772020484 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135806095811 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091591202667 0.0628817314937 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.6 14.3799401198 449% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -56.41 48.3550499002 -117% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.1628742515 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.4 12.197005988 430% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.14 8.32208582834 158% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 98.500998004 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.4 11.1389221557 470% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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