The proposed argument is talking about a cafe in a small American city facing some sort of financial crises and is looking for a solution for the same.I think there are a lot of factors on which the decision will depend viz. the population of the area, the standard of living and most importantly the problem which they are facing. It could be either low sales due to some reason or competition from other businessess.Before moving to any conclusion, let's delve into each issue begining from talking about the cafe itself and then analysing each case properly.
Firstly, assuming that the cafe is facing financial crunch and is looking to reduce the working hours.I think reducing the number of working hours would depend on two things the number of customers it can fetch in the morning period and cost it would bearing for the same.If they are getting enough customers in the morning I think the cafe should focus on adding new beverage suting the joggers and people who pace in the morning.However, if the problem is latter the cafe could try out saving some bucks by opening small stands outside the cafe or putting up some canopies near the population.This will definitely save some money and at the same time also increase the customer base.
Secondly, if the issue is competition from other businessess the cafe could try to be more approachable to the customers by doing the aforementioned canopy thing.Moreover, taking a small loss right now by giving some offers to the new customers would definitly reap fruits in the future.Also they could try out targeting customers on weekends when people come out in huge numbers.I think the solution to most problems in b to c bussiness is the lack of customers.The cafe needs to focus on the same to solve it's problems.
In conclusion,the cafe should take the call as per the status quo situation.I think the owner of the cafe should work on building solid customer base and focus on other ways of reducing cost.This will definitely make their situation better if not best.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: It could be either low sales due to some reason or competition from other businessess.Before moving to any conclusion, let's delve into each issue begining from talking about the cafe itself and then analysing each case properly.
Error: businessess Suggestion: businesses
Error: analysing Suggestion: analyzing
Error: begining Suggestion: beginning
Sentence: Firstly, assuming that the cafe is facing financial crunch and is looking to reduce the working hours.I think reducing the number of working hours would depend on two things the number of customers it can fetch in the morning period and cost it would bearing for the same.If they are getting enough customers in the morning I think the cafe should focus on adding new beverage suting the joggers and people who pace in the morning.However, if the problem is latter the cafe could try out saving some
Error: suting Suggestion: sting
Sentence: Secondly, if the issue is competition from other businessess the cafe could try to be more approachable to the customers by doing the aforementioned canopy thing.Moreover, taking a small loss right now by giving some offers to the new customers would definitly reap fruits in the future.Also they could try out targeting customers on weekends when people come out in huge numbers.I think the solution to most problems in b to c bussiness is the lack of customers.The cafe needs to focus on the same
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Error: businessess Suggestion: businesses
Error: definitly Suggestion: definitely
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 361 350
No. of Characters: 1651 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.573 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.365 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 51.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 29.046 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.448 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.726 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... is looking for a solution for the same.I think there are a lot of factors on whi...
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...n or competition from other businessess.Before moving to any conclusion, lets delve in...
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... is looking to reduce the working hours.I think reducing the number of working ho...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'bear'
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...in the morning period and cost it would bearing for the same.If they are getting enough...
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... and cost it would bearing for the same.If they are getting enough customers in th...
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...gers and people who pace in the morning.However, if the problem is latter the cafe coul...
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...ng up some canopies near the population.This will definitely save some money and at ...
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...y doing the aforementioned canopy thing.Moreover, taking a small loss right now by givin...
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Suggestion: Also
...uld definitly reap fruits in the future.Also they could try out targeting customers ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
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...uld definitly reap fruits in the future.Also they could try out targeting customers ...
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...ds when people come out in huge numbers.I think the solution to most problems in ...
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...to c bussiness is the lack of customers.The cafe needs to focus on the same to solv...
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... to solve its problems. In conclusion,the cafe should take the call as per the st...
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...he call as per the status quo situation.I think the owner of the cafe should work...
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Suggestion: This
...nd focus on other ways of reducing cost.This will definitely make their situation be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, i think, in conclusion, sort of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 348.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84482758621 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74881518814 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 22.8473053892 254% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.079151004 57.8364921388 346% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.0 119.503703932 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 23.324526521 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.8333333333 5.70786347227 365% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152015120025 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755623825708 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305580055262 0.0701772020484 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960038474772 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204424436847 0.0628817314937 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 14.3799401198 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 48.3550499002 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.197005988 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.1389221557 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.9071856287 210% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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