The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.
The issue in the editorial states that the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its border and the number of illegal immigrants that it can check and remove as these illegal immigrants endanger both the economy and national identity of the country and they should be deported to there counrty of origin. I stand with the belief that the aformentioned opinion is wrong for the following reasons.
Firstly, there is not proof that the influx of illegal immigrants entering the counrty endanger both the economy and national identity. In many developed first world countries the strenght of their nation is based on diversity and the different cultures it has. Immigrants from other countries not only bring with them there culture but also bring in new ideas with could benifit the country. The varaiety and diversion will only benifit the nation.
Secondly, even if the illegal immigrants are deported back to their country of origin what garantees that they will not try again to enter the country illegally? Majority of the people that move to another counrty illegally don't do it for leaisure but do it as they no other choice it could be because of the opressive goverment they have in their nation or it could be their nation has sufferd a natural calamity or worse is at war with another nation and all that these people want is a peacefull life. In such conditions deporting them back to their country in not only inhumane but will also motivate them to find better alternative to enter the country which will cause more trouble than there already is.
Thirdly, how does strenthening the border give assurance that will stop and remove all the illegal immigrants?Strenthening the border will only add an unnessary financial burden on the nation, instead these funds could be used to build infrastructure, hospitals and schools in the country. As far as removing illegal immigrants goes strenghtening the border does not garuntees it instead all it will do is incentivise the immigrants to find more artful ways to decieve the country into staying illegally in the country.
In conclusion rather than strenthening the border to remove illegal immigrants are deported back to their country based on unwarranted assumption. The country should try and make use of these immigrants to the best of their abilities and see how they can benifit from it not only that and also use the cost of strengthing there borders to better use which will actually benefit its people and as far as illegal immigrants endanger both the economy and national identity it has been proved to be false by many first world countires like Canada which have a very open immigration policy and the success it has had because of the these policies.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that move to another counrty illegally dont do it for leaisure but do it as they no...
^^^^
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Strenthening
...p and remove all the illegal immigrants?Strenthening the border will only add an unnessary f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., hospitals and schools in the country. As far as removing illegal immigrants goes...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...arranted assumption. The country should try and make use of these immigrants to the bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 464.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90948275862 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67516196294 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426724137931 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 705.55239521 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.929825689 57.8364921388 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.230769231 119.503703932 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6923076923 23.324526521 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.70786347227 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433162275878 0.218282227539 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175107389877 0.0743258471296 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142088096273 0.0701772020484 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284577728292 0.128457276422 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11062771756 0.0628817314937 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that move to another counrty illegally dont do it for leaisure but do it as they no...
^^^^
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Strenthening
...p and remove all the illegal immigrants?Strenthening the border will only add an unnessary f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., hospitals and schools in the country. As far as removing illegal immigrants goes...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...arranted assumption. The country should try and make use of these immigrants to the bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 464.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90948275862 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67516196294 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426724137931 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 705.55239521 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.929825689 57.8364921388 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.230769231 119.503703932 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6923076923 23.324526521 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.70786347227 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433162275878 0.218282227539 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175107389877 0.0743258471296 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142088096273 0.0701772020484 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284577728292 0.128457276422 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11062771756 0.0628817314937 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.