Balmer Island seems like a popular hotspot for summer holidays. This is irrefutable because the argument claims that the number of mopeds shoots up drastically during the summer months. The argument, which is filled with loopholes makes many suggestions to reduce the annual accidents.
First of all, the concerned authorities of the Balmer Island would have to produce the statistics of the accidents. One of the claims made in the argument is the reduction in the number of mopeds from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. Suppose, this is implemented, this provides so certainty that the accidents see a decrease in the number.
Secondly, there is a mention of the increase of mopeds. Furthermore, there is no statistical data or accidental records which shows a linear correlation between using of mopeds in summer and the accidental records. Also, how will reducing the mopeds reduce the accidents? Probably, the few people, who are riding the mopeds are the rash drivers and will still lead to the same number of accidents. Reducing the mopeds on the roads is not a solution but rather a preposterous solution. It could be termed as a stopgap for a problem.
Thirdly, the argument hasn't made a mention either explicitly or implicitly about the driver's license criteria before renting a moped. What if the rental companies are renting out mopeds to anyone without any legal check of their licenses? This can be considered as a huge reason for the accidents. What if the mopeds are driven by reckless tourists who have been charged or have been punished for accidents in their countries?
Regarding Seaville, the law passed by the town council might have turned out to be effective. This doesn't guarantee the same in Balmer Island. To conclude that the same policy will work, a few questions need to be answered. Are the populations of Seaville and Balmer Island close to comparable ? Do the compatriots of Seaville strictly adhere to the stringent rules imposed by the town council? If so, will the same policy be applicable to Balmer Island. The two places might have a lot of differences which come into play. For instance, the roads in Balmer Island might be more narrower when compared to the roads in Seaville, which might be the main reasons accidents are more prone in Balmer Island.
Finally, the flaws found in the argument need to be obviated before the town council can view the policy implemented in Seaville as impeccable in Balmer Island.
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not OK
argument 4 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 420 350
No. of Characters: 2008 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.527 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.781 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.56 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 162 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.21 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ds from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. Suppose, this is implemented, this pro...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
... the accidental records. Also, how will reducing the mopeds reduce the accidents? Probab...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...for a problem. Thirdly, the argument hasnt made a mention either explicitly or imp...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t have turned out to be effective. This doesnt guarantee the same in Balmer Island. To...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 575, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'narrower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: narrower
...ce, the roads in Balmer Island might be more narrower when compared to the roads in Seaville,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95693779904 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65418475527 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49043062201 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0153697807 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.88 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328507966652 0.218282227539 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897117493383 0.0743258471296 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693922917525 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165917383325 0.128457276422 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572191877214 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.