Cot Ten a cotton production company has recently faced profitability issues based on the use of Chemical X in its manufacturing process The main by product produced when using Chemical X is covered under stringent environmental regulations making it very | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Cot-Ten, a cotton production company, has recently faced profitability issues based on the use of Chemical X in its manufacturing process. The main by-product produced when using Chemical X is covered under stringent environmental regulations, making it very difficult and expensive to dispose of. A similar processing product, Chemical Y, has recently been discovered, and can be used by Cot-Ten at a minimal cost of switching. The CEO of Cot-Ten has declared that the company will increase profits by switching to Chemical Y by the end of the month. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence i

It is elucidated in the argument that Cot-Ten company’s chief excetive officer is going to replace the chemical x product used in the company with chemical y, on the basis that this new added chemical would accentuate the profit levels of the company, since the use of chemical x and its by-products were under the draconian radar of the enivronmental regulations and norms to be expunged out, to which i believe the ceo of this company is not being pragmatic enough by jumping to the an alternative product on just considering one angle of view, without weighing manifold options as well decrying the pros and cons leveraged with the usage of the new product.There is a needs of scrutinizating in mutifarious aspects, before jumping to claims like this.
The base foundation on which the company is balking the chemical x is that the refuge of it which needs to be warded off is an arduous task since there are stringent envirnoment laws linked with it, but are the new alternative, chemical y’s by-products or remanents viewed as well studied and even compared with the initial one to understand the difference between them in terms of the by products.Has the toxicity levels comparison been spiked between the two to suffice to the fact that chemcial y is better than chemical x .The disposal methods not been employed or disccused in the argument to solve the issue regarding the using chemical x .Does the chemical y falls inclusive within the environmental norms and regualtions before changing it in the company’s interface.This new chemical y has shown to improve profitability by any past industries for which substanial amount of statistical data is needed which the argument is bereft of.There are no annals presented in relation to the efficiany of the usage of chemical y or even whether chemical y is superior to chemical x if replaced, so making an expediated decision into replacing the company’s processing plant with a substance like chemical y would be invalid in circumspect.
If the argument is stating that the “similar processing “ chemical y can be used at minimal cost of switching, this critical claim makes the overall argument pretty bleak, since if they are identical in nature as suggested then wouldn’t the by-products be the same for which there are no data or inventories related to it for comparing two processing products.Minimal cost of switching is just a apocryphal mirage which entices the ceo to switch to the new product, but in fact it is going to futile in long term, if myriad factors are not considered ranging from the ball park profitability margins linked with to the envirnmental norms associated with this replacement.
Thus, in nutshell, there is a need to establish validity as well the switch needs further exploration in terms of research, data, annals and many more when it comes to the change in the processing plant product of the Cot-Ten company, without concrete evidence these assumptios are skeptical as well could turn to undesirable ramifications.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 55.5748502994 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 2260.96107784 112% => OK
No of words: 503.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02385685885 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00363205943 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 204.123752495 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493041749503 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 125.0 22.8473053892 547% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 324.12372252 57.8364921388 560% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 631.75 119.503703932 529% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 125.75 23.324526521 539% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.70786347227 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323743605697 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19085471682 0.0743258471296 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857190606141 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19085471682 0.128457276422 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857190606141 0.0628817314937 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.1 14.3799401198 453% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.4 48.3550499002 -115% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.0 12.197005988 426% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.92 8.32208582834 167% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 98.500998004 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.0 11.1389221557 467% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 11.9071856287 437% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments