The author argued against the ban of further development of real state on farmland based on past experience in Chestnut County. The past experience can't transferred in to empirical truth by state the history alone, without adequate control on housing demand and supply, population census nor neighboring competition.
In term of pricing, the valuation and pricing can't exist by itself. An object's value is determined by transactions. Without clear indication of past Chestnut market warmness (that is how frequently the transactions are being made). There can be clear explanation of price. Ma...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1958 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.995 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.016 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.292 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.475 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ment of real state on farmland based on past experience in Chestnut County. The past experience...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...past experience in Chestnut County. The past experience cant transferred in to empirical truth ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in Chestnut County. The past experience cant transferred in to empirical truth by st...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n census nor neighboring competition. In term of pricing, the valuation and pr...
^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...m of pricing, the valuation and pricing cant exist by itself. An objects value is de...
^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...be accepted by both parties, the seller cant raise the price without the consent of ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...the price without the consent of buyer, other wise the buyer will walk out of the deal. A ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s could ultimately decide not to buy or cant afford the adjusted price at all. Thus,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the lowered price increase is obscured. Pine county is a different story and a d...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 392.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11989795918 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7629788667 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2950737544 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 5.70786347227 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893113192928 0.218282227539 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294654208834 0.0743258471296 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336548113064 0.0701772020484 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575086037924 0.128457276422 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027083287558 0.0628817314937 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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