“In the first four year that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two business have closed as mayor for four years before Montoya, the unemployment rate decreased

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“In the first four year that Montoya has served as mayor of the city of San Perdito, the population has decreased and the unemployment rate has increased. Two business have closed as mayor for four years before Montoya, the unemployment rate decreased and the population increased. Clearly, the residentof San Perdito would be best served if they voted Montoya out of office and reelected Varro”

During a period of time when Montaya was a mayor, the city would have immigration problems which considered to decreasing of population. However the unemployment rate has increased, if the population was decreased so according to this argument doesn’t justified fully. In addition if two businesses have closed for each new business that has opened and to sum here the decreasing of population the rate of unemployment have to be showed low rate.
So we see that first two sentences are not satisfied us for enough evidence. We should know the reason of people diminish and increasing of rate unemployment. The second one whose political strategies was not so satisfied. Under Varro`s period mayor time the unemployment rate decreased one of the reasons can be convenient environment of business building for new economic politics. The reasons can be support from the mayor side (government) which is also very profitable the numver of population also also was increased, the reason could be the first evidence base on that unemployment rate low according to this factor people was interested in this city than other onew. However we don’t have enough evidence for supporting an arguments we can suggest to serving for San Pentito.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
During a period of time when Montaya was a mayor, the city woul...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...considered to decreasing of population. However the unemployment rate has increased, if...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creased, if the population was decreased so according to this argument doesn&apos...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...gument doesn't justified fully. In addition if two businesses have closed for each ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rate unemployment. The second one whose political strategies was not so satisfie...
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Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: also
...ery profitable the numver of population also also was increased, the reason could be the ...
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Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nterested in this city than other onew. However we don't have enough evidence for ...
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Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an argument' or simply 'arguments'?
Suggestion: an argument; arguments
...s;t have enough evidence for supporting an arguments we can suggest to serving for San Penti...
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Line 2, column 793, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can suggest to serving for San Pentito.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 441.139720559 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97820935249 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9326336566 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 5.15768463074 39% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34089311555 0.218282227539 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141364423039 0.0743258471296 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949091703281 0.0701772020484 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305222535526 0.128457276422 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759755612595 0.0628817314937 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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