In the following letter appeared from the owner of Sunnyside Towers, in which it's stated that one month ago on five floors, the water flow is restricted approximately one-third of its flow of its original flow.Just because no complaints have been registered apart from the low pressure of water, the owner is concluding that it Sunnyside Towers will have considerable amount of saving and later on they'll be able make profits with this little technique.However, before this recommendation can be evaluated, some questions must be answered.
First of all by reducing the water flow to one-third of flow from it's original flow, in other words will the decrease use of
overall water? So the flow of water has been decreased only on the five floors, can be generalised about the other floors as well? It is possible that usage of the less water will make company profits. However if there is a large swimming pool in the towers, what are key things that will be taken into account for water not to get wasted. The main point to decrease the water usage.And given that no initial and final readings are there, how the owner can be so sure that it will bring less cost and more profits.Shouldn't the readings be the decision maker of the water flow and then technically profits as well.
Secondly owner is telling that no complaints have been registered other than low pressure? The whole scenario is just recorded for a month, what if in upcoming months people do get the problem of low pressure. If maximum number of the people start complaining about the pressure then it's need to get solved and more over the maintenance and staff cost will be adjunct in this whole process. And how about the parts which have been installed? Tower will the going to bear the cost for its replacement, well it's reducing the water flow, so according to the assumption it can be considered on higher side. And what if people start moving out of the apartments? Because of this instance the name of the SunnySide Towers can get abate.
In Conclusion the argument, as it stands now, is considerable flawed due to its reliance on several unwanted assumptions. If the owner is able to provide answers to above questions and offer more evidence(perhaps in the form of more systematic research study), then its a possible that usage of less water can turn down less cost and more profits for SunnySide Towers.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 420 350
No. of Characters: 1935 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.527 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.607 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.455 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.706 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.28 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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In the following letter appeared from th...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Just
...-third of its flow of its original flow.Just because no complaints have been registe...
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Line 1, column 405, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: they'll
...siderable amount of saving and later on theyll be able make profits with this little t...
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Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: However
...make profits with this little technique.However, before this recommendation can be eval...
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...ated, some questions must be answered. First of all by reducing the water...
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... in other words will the decrease use of overall water? So the flow of water has ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e less water will make company profits. However if there is a large swimming pool in th...
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Suggestion: And
... main point to decrease the water usage.And given that no initial and final reading...
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Suggestion: Shouldnt
...t will bring less cost and more profits.Shouldnt the readings be the decision maker of t...
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Suggestion: Shouldn't
...t will bring less cost and more profits.Shouldnt the readings be the decision maker of t...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nd then technically profits as well. Secondly owner is telling that no compla...
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...ming months people do get the problem of low pressure. If maximum number of the p...
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Line 6, column 665, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple start moving out of the apartments? Because of this instance the name of the SunnyS...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... the SunnySide Towers can get abate. In Conclusion the argument, as it stands...
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Line 8, column 268, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...of more systematic research study, then its a possible that usage of less water can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, apart from, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 414.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77536231884 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67451084093 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466183574879 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.428900281 57.8364921388 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.8 119.503703932 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.70786347227 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28045607423 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855133673807 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920130053152 0.0701772020484 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174566420159 0.128457276422 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103113433822 0.0628817314937 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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