As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Read out the past loud, & see that we always have been the prisoner's of our thinking and now a days this new modernized prision is called "technology". going to Work, or gym or somewhere nearbuy people having cellphones glued to the ears, or watching a show or CNN news. we humans are getting stupid and lazy these days. I agree that ability to think for themselves have totally been deteriote and could be more serious in upcoming years if some correct measure would not be introduced.As the day passes by , a new technology is been introduced into the new modernized world.
Although there are lot of things in which technology is helping the human mankind for example saving a life , try to make complex calculations fast so people have more time to think about more of complex things , Connecting to the loved one's via cellphones, sharing good stuff on internet . But if you look meticulously , more of the negative things are getting dismentiated all around. Children are not ready to go outside and play because they are stuck with their Ipad's and not getting the real fact , one day it will all seem to be fake. we are abating our qualties of life .
Therefore i conclude to this point , technology should be served with the certain amount of restrictions or else one day as correctly said by Mr. Eintein that "there will be a day when technology will superpass humans and only fools will be born".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77642276423 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85048138687 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5761397123 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.555555556 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207689520618 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724760896839 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563726367301 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131576626538 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374741537862 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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