The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small
business serving a suburban town.
"There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their
own -vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were
dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the
gardening magazine Great Gardens has sold out at the Village News stand three months in a
row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly
expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring."
This is a memo written by the owner of the Green Thumb gardening center to show how the profit of the GT is increase by selling the vegetables which are grown locally in the gardening center. o support the following argument he presented a lacking lacking interest of the consumers towards the supermarket vegetable products and growing growning interest of the customers towards their own vegetable. he also represents another thing to support his argument, the gardening gardening magazine sold out at the village newsstand three months in a row. I am not much convinced with the owner point of view here. So, basically, t's a poor argument.
Firstly, Dissatisation of the customers or lacking lacking intrest in the supermarket vegetable product doesn't mean that they are stop purchasing from the supermarket or they prefer local own growing product. probably they are purchasing that from the other stock market instead growing own. thus thus growning growning intrest in lical product doesn't mean they doesn't prefer the supermarket product.
Secondly, The magzine great garden sold increase increase may be due due to it's whole content not only because of that vegetable sold and intrest column. In magzine probably there are others columns and articles which attract the people or in that village probably probably it's rural area where there is not found other other magzine and people have no choice to buy magzine rather than that one. increase in sells of the magzine doesn't mean that there's great increase of the intrest of the people towards their locally growing vegetable.
Thirdly, the author claims that the national survey survey is conducted which which reflect that that there's customers customers disatisfaction with the supermarket product yet he he did't produce any supporting evidences to support support his argument.
probably, those customers maybe be practicipate in that conducted survey. he didn't give any statistical data to prove his claim. thus due to the presented evidences, Iam not much convinced with the author point of view. The argument is unpersuable.If the author presented well stastiscial data with proper consumer interest towards vegetable growth then only only i support his argument.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: This is a memo written by the owner of the Green Thumb gardening center to show how the profit of the GT is increase by selling the vegetables which are grown locally in the gardening center. o support the following argument he presented a lacking lacking interest of the consumers towards the supermarket vegetable products and growing growning interest of the customers towards their own vegetable. he also represents another thing to support his argument, the gardening gardening magazine sold
Error: growning Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Firstly, Dissatisation of the customers or lacking lacking intrest in the supermarket vegetable product doesn't mean that they are stop purchasing from the supermarket or they prefer local own growing product. probably they are purchasing that from the other stock market instead growing own. thus thus growning growning intrest in lical product doesn't mean they doesn't prefer the supermarket product.
Error: doesn Suggestion: does
Error: growning Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: intrest Suggestion: interest
Error: lical Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Secondly, The magzine great garden sold increase increase may be due due to it's whole content not only because of that vegetable sold and intrest column.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: intrest Suggestion: interest
Error: magzine Suggestion: magazine
Sentence: In magzine probably there are others columns and articles which attract the people or in that village probably probably it's rural area where there is not found other other magzine and people have no choice to buy magzine rather than that one. increase in sells of the magzine doesn't mean that there's great increase of the intrest of the people towards their locally growing vegetable.
Error: doesn Suggestion: does
Error: intrest Suggestion: interest
Error: magzine Suggestion: magazine
Sentence: Thirdly, the author claims that the national survey survey is conducted which which reflect that that there's customers customers disatisfaction with the supermarket product yet he he did't produce any supporting evidences to support support his argument.
Error: disatisfaction Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: probably, those customers maybe be practicipate in that conducted survey. he didn't give any statistical data to prove his claim. thus due to the presented evidences, Iam not much convinced with the author point of view.
Error: practicipate Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: didn Suggestion: did
Sentence: The argument is unpersuable.If the author presented well stastiscial data with proper consumer interest towards vegetable growth then only only i support his argument.
Error: stastiscial Suggestion: statistical
Error: unpersuable Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1849 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.094 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.376 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.672 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: O
...grown locally in the gardening center. o support the following argument he prese...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: lacking
... the following argument he presented a lacking lacking ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...customers towards their own vegetable. he also represents another thing to suppo...
^^
Line 8, column 55, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gardening
...ther thing to support his argument, the gardening gardening ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: lacking
...stly, Dissatisation of the customers or lacking lacking ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...st in the supermarket vegetable product doesnt mean that they are stop purchasing fro...
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Line 12, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Probably
...they prefer local own growing product. probably they are purchasing that from the other...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ther stock market instead growing own. thus thus ' style='white-space: pr...
^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: thus
...ther stock market instead growing own. thus thus ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...ther stock market instead growing own. thus thus ' style='white-space: pr...
^^^^
Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: growning
...space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>growning growning ' style='cursor: default;&apo...
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Line 13, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...default;'>intrest in lical product doesnt mean they doesnt prefer the supermarke...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rest in lical product doesnt mean they doesnt prefer the supermarket product. Secondl...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: increase
...Secondly, The magzine great garden sold increase increase ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: due
...pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>may be due due ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: probably
... attract the people or in that village probably probably ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
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Line 16, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
...its rural area where there is not found other other ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increase
...ce to buy magzine rather than that one. increase in sells of the magzine doesnt mean tha...
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Line 16, column 335, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t one. increase in sells of the magzine doesnt mean that theres great increase of the ...
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Line 16, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...n sells of the magzine doesnt mean that theres great increase of the intrest of the pe...
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Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: survey
...ly, the author claims that the national survey survey ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
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Line 17, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: which
...ap; cursor: default;'>is conducted which which ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
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Line 17, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...re-wrap; cursor: default;'>reflect that that ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>theres customers customers ' style='...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: customers
...pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>theres customers customers ' style='cursor: default;&apo...
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Line 18, column 25, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: he
...ction with the supermarket product yet he he ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: support
...dt produce any supporting evidences to support support ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
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Line 20, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Probably
... cursor: default;'>hi8s argument. probably, those customers maybe be practicipate ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 9, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...practicipate in that conducted survey. he didnt give any statistical data to prov...
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Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...cticipate in that conducted survey. he didnt give any statistical data to prove his ...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ny statistical data to prove his claim. thus due to the presented evidences, Iam not...
^^^^
Line 21, column 64, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...ny statistical data to prove his claim. thus due to the presented evidences, Iam not...
^^^^
Line 22, column 25, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...t of view. The argument is unpersuable.If the author presented well stastiscial d...
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Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: only
...interest towards vegetable growth then only only ' style='white-space: pre-wra...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 81, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;'>i support his argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2890.0 2260.96107784 128% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.91387559809 5.12650576532 135% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.20946733761 2.78398813304 187% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433014354067 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 705.55239521 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59920159681 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 147.994180101 57.8364921388 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.625 119.503703932 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 23.324526521 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 5.15768463074 446% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.25449101796 666% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0443641225547 0.218282227539 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322464984927 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443484806437 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338448513295 0.128457276422 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452490864385 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.3799401198 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 48.3550499002 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.09 12.5979740519 183% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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