"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."

Essay topics:

"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose
views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."

do we really learn much from the people whose vies and the thoughts are the same as we share than those whose view are contradicts ours. The speaker claim so, the reason behind the stress and reduce in the learning capacity or desire to learn is disagreement of the views? well, I'm not much convinced with the clai of the author. In my view, we can learn much from a debate with those ideas that contradict with our own.

Admittedly, under some circumstance, we can learn much from the disagreements, as a counterproductive of learning. well let's take one example to support, we all watch television, what if there's only a football match and it will happen as per our thought and it continues every time same. After a few times seriously we will be bored. or let's take another example, Won't we entertain when politicians view contradict with each other? OF course, we do. Apart from these during a disagreement, our learning is impeded.

Instead of inhibiting learning, disagreement enhance learning capacity. For example, Researcher of Chemistry learn much more from debating the historical theory, they debate and disagree with the old one and put their logical point and discovered the new theory which is very beneficial for future as well as present time. Thus, we conclude that disagreements usually leads to enhance learning.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, of course, as well as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81377212657 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0391505848 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1538461538 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362110872878 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128452125711 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937767169418 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239526505868 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916894412568 0.0667264976115 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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