The author wants to make a point that the employee should work in dedicated 40 hrs and should not do overtime as it'll lead to more errors. Because of lack of information and proof the author's side is getting weaken
Firstly, the number of employees is not mentioned in the survey. most of the employees are tend to strongly agree but there is not mentioned that they agreed or not because of this reason the survey can't be considered as a reliable source of information. The year of conduction is also not given in the survey it may possible that the year in which this survey conducted is at the start of the company and there are fewer employees.
Furthermore, in internal studies, the number of subdivisions that participated in studies are not mentioned so this makes people who work 48 hours are error prone claims unreliable . since the number of people which participated in studies are not mentioned, managers who are responsible for providing the are also not given so more information gathering with whole employee group participation is needed
lastly, the system which finds the error rate is not described properly the number of ways in which the system counts error is unknown so it may possible that the system is showing random errors for the employees who are working more hours. If the workload is more it may possible that many employees are working overtime and no of employees who work 40 hrs are less compared to who work overtime.
In conclusion, due to lack of information given it can't be determined that information is valid and decision can't be done on claims done using survey and internal study .
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1333 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.71 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.591 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.683 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.436 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.812 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...proof the authors side is getting weaken Firstly, the number of employees is not ...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...ployees is not mentioned in the survey. most of the employees are tend to strongly a...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...n the survey. most of the employees are tend to strongly agree but there is not ment...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r not because of this reason the survey cant be considered as a reliable source of i...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... hours are error prone claims unreliable . since the number of people which partic...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...urs are error prone claims unreliable . since the number of people which participated...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...agers who are responsible for providing the are also not given so more information gath...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e employee group participation is needed lastly, the system which finds the error...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...loyee group participation is needed lastly, the system which finds the error rate ...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...many employees are working overtime and no of employees who work 40 hrs are less c...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...es who work 40 hrs are less compared to who work overtime. In conclusion, due t...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to who work overtime. In conclusion, due to lack of information given it cant...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n, due to lack of information given it cant be determined that information is valid...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...n, due to lack of information given it cant be determined that information is valid...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that information is valid and decision cant be done on claims done using survey and...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ims done using survey and internal study .
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ms done using survey and internal study .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 282.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8085106383 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65393936777 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 204.123752495 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464539007092 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.845178368 57.8364921388 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 119.503703932 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 23.324526521 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.70786347227 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163576013208 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830119014522 0.0743258471296 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617361462396 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863786092288 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859277102516 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.3799401198 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.3550499002 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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