The following appeared as part of an article in a Dillton newspaper.
"In an effort to bring new jobs to Dillton and stimulate the city's flagging economy, Dillton's city council voted last year to lower the city's corporate tax rate by 15 percent; at the same time, the city began offering generous relocation grants to any company that would move to Dillton. Since these changes went into effect, two new factories have opened in Dillton. Although the two factories employ more than 1,000 people, the unemployment rate in Dillton remains unchanged. The only clear explanation for this is that the new factories are staffed with out-of-town workers rather than Dillton residents."
The assumption of the author in this memo about new factories are staffed more non-resident workers than Dillton residents sounds illogically unconvincing fore several reasons. The author ignores important information and some question needed to be answered in order to decide about author’s conclusion.
First question is raises from the scant statistical information about the number of workers in these factories or graduated juveniles in this city. It is entirely possible all works in two factories are Dillton residents, while the number of them is too low to decrease the rate of employment. In addition, many students graduated from the university inters in group of unemployment people. Of course, the author must consider this possibility that many people move in the city after establishing the factories. In short, since the argument relies on the limited statistical information, the author’s result is not acceptable.
The second question is that whether decreasing the city's corporate tax can encourage companies. In fact, it is entirely possible the amount of original tax was so high that decreasing it by 15 percent is not attractive for companies. In addition, the author does not provide any guarantee that establishing new factories in this city can decrease the rate of unemployment and improve economic growth. It is possible factories hire non-residential workers, and surely; residents’ economic condition will remain unchanged.
In the third place, base on the fact that two factories have opened in the city, the author infers that efforts of Dillton's city council is successful. However, it is not necessarily the case. Indeed, the author overlook that other factors can be more effective. Having the great number of unemployment people lead factories to have access cheap workforce. Without considering this possible scenario, the author can not justifiably conclude that council’s decisions are successful.
In sum up, the argument is flawed rationally and therefore unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen the argument, the author must provide more statistical information about the number of workers in the factories, and those are added to group of unemployment people recently. To evaluate better the author’s assumption, we must know about all effective factors on the economic growth.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in short', 'of course', 'in the third place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268115942029 0.25644967241 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.132850241546 0.15541462614 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108695652174 0.0836205057962 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0507246376812 0.0520304965353 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0193236714976 0.0272364105082 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.125424944231 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0314009661836 0.0416121511921 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.12083685427 2.79052419416 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169082125604 0.026700313972 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108695652174 0.113004496875 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193236714976 0.0255425247493 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0024154589372 0.0127820249294 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2357.0 2731.13054187 86% => OK
No of words: 358.0 446.07635468 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58379888268 6.12365571057 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.441340782123 0.378187486979 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349162011173 0.287650121315 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.276536312849 0.208842608468 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201117318436 0.135150697306 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12083685427 2.79052419416 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 207.018472906 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505586592179 0.469332199767 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.5886214555 52.1807786196 103% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8421052632 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1055700463 57.7814097925 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.052631579 141.986410481 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.724660767414 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.58251231527 0% => OK
Readability: 53.7583063805 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.11904761905 1.8405768891 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414227300784 0.441005458295 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104372713604 0.135418324435 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0734132948369 0.0829849096947 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58412570705 0.58762219726 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12190432967 0.147661913831 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173847635297 0.193483328276 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648504329064 0.0970749176394 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445586231649 0.42659136922 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0285825592684 0.0774707102158 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297898641277 0.312017818177 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376035896247 0.0698173142475 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 14.657635468 109% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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