The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station. -Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us_ Therefore. in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues. we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument is about the influence of tv program with the advertisemnet and people interest. The business manager of a television station assumes that the cancelaton of local advertisement as well as people interests is decreasing due to the change m late-night program. He wants to claim that due to casting of national news in late-night viewers are tossing their interst and they began to complain about that.He also says the revenue of the tv channel is also decreasing, as the local businees man are canceling their advertisement . To evaluate this argumnet proper data is needed:The manager shows no evidence of data that shows the direct influence of broadI.asting of national news at late-night. Though actual data is not provided, it seems that local people are usually wnats to get the news about their locality rathe than the bnational news before go for sleeping.Besides they will be more eagerly waiting for the weather forecast for the next day.So i thnk the evidence would stmgthen the argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 2260.96107784 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 441.139720559 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90508659585 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.468620217663 131% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 705.55239521 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6111102947 57.8364921388 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.6 119.503703932 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 23.324526521 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.70786347227 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217004736389 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111631666823 0.0743258471296 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504723813962 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217004736389 0.128457276422 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 98.500998004 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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