A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response m which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Students are the asset to a nation So, a nation should need that all of its students to study the same curriculum up to they enter college. Beacuse they need the same types of basic knowledge. If there are several types of curriculum m one nation the students will get different education. Besides they way of thinking and perspesctive of lives will also be changed That will create variation among them m long run_ So it is important for a nation of having a universal idelogy that suits to that nation. Some may say that,it is not nescessry for same national curriculum. They may give logic that a doctor need not the same cumculur in school that a engineer need_But the ideology of the author is to provide same national curriculum before they enter college.College is the entry level educcation stage for a particular job oriented study.So when all the students getting same curriculum and then enter the college, their previous same education do not make any problem raper they will find every thing more familiar. A doctor will find that his learning about basic machine operating or maintainence will help him in using his profetional equipment. In the same way an engineer can use his basic medical knowledge in any case of mediacal hazarad. After they passing out from their college and began to work in national building they will find that then co-worker may have other profession but deep inside him the national goal will be the same as him. So, it will help in naition building more effectively if the nation provides the same national curriculum until the enter college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...need the same types of basic knowledge. If there are several types of curriculum m...
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...ogy that suits to that nation. Some may say that,it is not nescessry for same natio...
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... suits to that nation. Some may say that,it is not nescessry for same national curr...
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...al curriculum before they enter college.College is the entry level educcation stage for...
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...age for a particular job oriented study.So when all the students getting same curr...
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...ides the same national curriculum until the enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, in any case, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82051282051 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56925698563 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.268370266 60.3974514979 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28512477498 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142964601998 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108852243797 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28512477498 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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