Due to the plummeting of advertising revenues and viewers, the author provides a cursory suggestion about time allotemant recession for late-night news programs. His idea is based upon some incomplete statistical data which still needs some improvements.
First of all, viewers were complaining about weather and local news reports. For improving weather reports, the tv-station should invest more time in collecting weather data from authorative sources. Only increasing the allotement time for weather news presentation for false or impractical data, would not satisfy the viewers.
In addition to ensuring the authenticity of the news, the business manager should also analyse the perfect time management for distinctive local news. The arguement does not provide enough information about its former allotted time level. The time management should be decided with scrutiny for better impact on the viewer as well as for the advertisers.
Again, increasing time in local and weather news also means to reduce time for national news. Therefore, it can be the case that companies running their business nationwide may back off from their advertising contracts. This will results huge revenue loss which will be far worse than some small advertising contracts reduction.
In conclusion, only restoring to the previous allotted time for weather and local news presentation is not sufficient to increase advertisement reveneus and viewers. The tv-station should also consider the authenticity of its news source for both local and weather news. It also come up with punctilious plan for its time management, not just following blindly it conventional system.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Due to the plummeting of advertising revenues and viewers, the author provides a cursory suggestion about time allotemant recession for late-night news programs.
Error: allotemant Suggestion: allotment
Sentence: For improving weather reports, the tv-station should invest more time in collecting weather data from authorative sources.
Error: authorative Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: tv-station Suggestion: station
Sentence: The arguement does not provide enough information about its former allotted time level.
Error: arguement Suggestion: argument
Sentence: In conclusion, only restoring to the previous allotted time for weather and local news presentation is not sufficient to increase advertisement reveneus and viewers.
Error: reveneus Suggestion: revenues
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 252 350
No. of Characters: 1377 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.464 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.546 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... their advertising contracts. This will results huge revenue loss which will be far wor...
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Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...or both local and weather news. It also come up with punctilious plan for its time m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 252.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62698412698 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89924882323 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1451989583 57.8364921388 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.70786347227 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363827554634 0.218282227539 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148887281472 0.0743258471296 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110784409885 0.0701772020484 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222887444739 0.128457276422 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498303489703 0.0628817314937 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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