In the memorandum, from business manger of television station, it is stated that there are complaints regarding national news and loss of revenue because of devoted time to national news over local news. So, at first glance the author's argument seems to be convincing but further reflection reveals that it is rife with holes and assumption.
To begin with, the author mentions that over the past years the time devoted to weather and local news is decreased and more time is devoted to national news. Here the author doesn't provide any statistical data of years, how much time was increased and how did it exactly affect the viewership of the channel. Without any solid evidence and statistics about time period and years one can't get the adequate idea about what was the exact change.
Furthermore, the author states that many complaints had been received from viewers concerned with weather and local news coverage. The author fails to provide concrete evidences of complaints received. As complaints could be of quality of coverage, or repetitive news about same topic. It is possible that people did not have problem with the content which is shown i.e. national news but because it was shown for the less time. As author doesn't mention what were the exact complaints of the people, so we can't draw conclusion about people wanting weather and local news over national news. Also, was there any survey conducted about people's predilection for local news and would the viewership will be regained if time of weather and local news is increased again to its original time.
Finally, the author mentions that local business who used to advertise during late night news program has cancelled their contract. Here if the author states the reasons of cancelled contract explicitly, it would be better to evaluate the reasons. Company could cancel the contracts for various reasons such as, arguments between TV station staff and business managers, the affordability and pricing of advertisements, some internal financial issues in the company. So, without any substantial evidence one cannot assume that company cancelling their contracts were due to increased time to national news.
In conclusion, the argument if flawed for the above mentioned reasons and it is therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts about time, quality of coverage, people's exact complaints, reasons of cancelled contracts and survey of people's preference.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: MANGER_MANAGER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'business manager'?
Suggestion: business manager
In the memorandum, from business manger of television station, it is stated tha...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ver local news. So, at first glance the authors argument seems to be convincing but fur...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...voted to national news. Here the author doesnt provide any statistical data of years, ...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tistics about time period and years one cant get the adequate idea about what was th...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt which is shown i.e. national news but because it was shown for the less time. ...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... was shown for the less time. As author doesnt mention what were the exact complaints ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e exact complaints of the people, so we cant draw conclusion about people wanting we...
^^^^
Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...racts and survey of peoples preference.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26368159204 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65548166659 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5294117647 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.470588235 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.70786347227 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423922489827 0.218282227539 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148055233985 0.0743258471296 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146827997755 0.0701772020484 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241355701227 0.128457276422 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125826884099 0.0628817314937 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: MANGER_MANAGER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'business manager'?
Suggestion: business manager
In the memorandum, from business manger of television station, it is stated tha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ver local news. So, at first glance the authors argument seems to be convincing but fur...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...voted to national news. Here the author doesnt provide any statistical data of years, ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tistics about time period and years one cant get the adequate idea about what was th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt which is shown i.e. national news but because it was shown for the less time. ...
^^
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... was shown for the less time. As author doesnt mention what were the exact complaints ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e exact complaints of the people, so we cant draw conclusion about people wanting we...
^^^^
Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...racts and survey of peoples preference.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26368159204 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65548166659 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5294117647 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.470588235 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.70786347227 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423922489827 0.218282227539 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148055233985 0.0743258471296 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146827997755 0.0701772020484 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241355701227 0.128457276422 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125826884099 0.0628817314937 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.