Set us first discuss the arguments given by the Board of Directors of Monarch books in the favour of opening a cafe in its store, which they plan at the cost of a children’s book section. As mentioned in the report, the Cafe has become a popular destination for a wide selection of books on all subjects, being at the same locatio for more than twenty years. This can be due to a lot of factors – be its ambience, strategically correct location, antique collection, well maintenance, etc. so it is clear that having a cafe would attract more customers.
However, this is being done at the cost of children’s book section, and its effects need to be well anticipated. A result from the national census has been quoted that indicated a significant decline in the percentage of population under ten. It is well known that national census is recorded for whole of the nation and while it shows the average trend, it does not indicate about the population of children in the particular locality in which Monarch books is located. Without this piece if information we cannot comment about the popularity of Children’s book section. It is quite possible that Monarch books is located near a big school and is often visited by various class groups once in a month, which can be a big source of revenue. Thereby discontinuing the children’s book section might lead to a big blow to the store’s finances, as compared to the benefits from the newly opened Cafe.
Its being the only bookstore in the vicinity of a local college will, however, have the intended effect as teenagers are more inclined towards cafes in thier free time. This distinction makes it important to analyze the type of audience of Monarch, before taking any decision. As far as the other bookstore – Regale books is concerned, its successful opening of a cafe does not prove a general trend. Regale books might be located in a place where people come in the evenings, or to spend their free time, and opening a cafe will surely be of a benefit. It also needs to be studied whether Regale books sacrificed a book section for the Cafe or openend it in a certain area. In the case of Monarch books, opening a cafe comes at the cost of children’s book section, so we need to make sure that this isnt a pyrrhic step. If Regale books has opened the Cafe in a newly acquired land, than this stands as a no loss bragain for them and comparing them to Monarch will not be justified. In that case, opening a cafe might turn out as a big risk. In colclusion, the board of directors should well study the distribution of readers of various genres and take into account the location preferences before investing into something that can potentially do more harm than good.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 483 350
No. of Characters: 2190 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.688 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.534 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.519 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.418 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.46 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 806, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...tion, so we need to make sure that this isnt a pyrrhic step. If Regale books has ope...
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Line 5, column 889, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ened the Cafe in a newly acquired land, than this stands as a no loss bragain for th...
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Line 5, column 894, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the Cafe in a newly acquired land, than this stands as a no loss bragain for them an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 485.0 441.139720559 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69072164948 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76522135541 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 705.55239521 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3185397321 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.736842105 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.20758483034 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278251864221 0.218282227539 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913035665701 0.0743258471296 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556597259479 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21317217092 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372945514479 0.0628817314937 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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