The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. Integrally, there may not be large possibility of a person to die as a result of inoculations but there can be high possibility of permanent damage.Furthermore,Small possibility is vague language as it depends on the area impacted.Moreover, cow flu could lead to plague if not administered when the area of impact is limited.
The main question lies that may be cow flu is not life threatening but there can be huge impact of the flu on people:generic mutation,permanent damage,which is as devastating as death. There can also be impact of the flu on varies other factor like milk, trees etc which can impact the people in future times.if inoculation against flu can save life of the people. inoculation should be permitted on regular basis. Death cannot be considered the only factor for extrapolation. if the analysis that it is not impacting any of the factor then there are various other questions to be answered.
Small possibility is weakening the argument as small possibility doesn't explain the exact people getting impacted. For example, there is only 1% chance of death owing to inoculation but the area effective has a populace of 1 crore that means 1 lakh people are impacted, which seems to be small possibility but the number is huge.the exact analyses of the possibility of death need to be considered instead of the vague reference for making a major decision.
If the argument suggest the area impacted have very less populace and possibility is almost negligible. Still the argument doesn't consider that aspect whether this flu can be spread or the impact of the flu will remain to the impacted region only. Currently the situation can be handled by routine administration but if the flu spread and the possibility of the inoculation is no longer feasible. It can result into plague and a high alert situation.
The argument can be strength if the populace of area impacted and all the other effects of the flu other then death are considered and still the impact is almost negligible then the conclusion of not spending money and resources on the inoculated is projected will make sense.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 371 350
No. of Characters: 1769 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.389 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.768 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.735 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.735 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson to die as a result of inoculations but there can be high possibility of per...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...be high possibility of permanent damage.Furthermore,Small possibility is vague language as ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Small
...sibility of permanent damage.Furthermore,Small possibility is vague language as it dep...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...uage as it depends on the area impacted.Moreover, cow flu could lead to plague if not ad...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , permanent
...ct of the flu on people:generic mutation,permanent damage,which is as devastating as death...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...people:generic mutation,permanent damage,which is as devastating as death. There can a...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inoculation
...gainst flu can save life of the people. inoculation should be permitted on regular basis. D...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ered the only factor for extrapolation. if the analysis that it is not impacting a...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ered the only factor for extrapolation. if the analysis that it is not impacting a...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ening the argument as small possibility doesnt explain the exact people getting impact...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on but the area effective has a populace of 1 crore that means 1 lakh people are ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...e and possibility is almost negligible. Still the argument doesnt consider that aspec...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s almost negligible. Still the argument doesnt consider that aspect whether this flu c...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to the impacted region only. Currently the situation can be handled by routine ...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...ed and all the other effects of the flu other then death are considered and still the imp...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... all the other effects of the flu other then death are considered and still the imp...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... effects of the flu other then death are considered and still the impact is almos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 363.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99449035813 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15045060909 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449035812672 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.7069560093 57.8364921388 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274837215716 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100774176529 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607401081788 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165053277699 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409539188119 0.0628817314937 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 12.3882235529 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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