"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The dean of television station(TVs) for imroving the number of viewer wants to cange their routin program. First of all, this statement base of limited evidence becouse this is just on some complain in one year and also cancling some advertaiment that revelatly to the money and also the problem about the time of the problem.
Firstly, in the past year people complain about the time of the weather and the local news, so these people have no intention to national news or just want the time of the program is extended. for inhabitant of this place it is acceptable to use all the time for just local news. Peole from different age group have different interest for example the old like local news on the other hand, the younge like international news like national festival and sport game. It was better to ask all citizon about their prifernce instead of a few people.
Secondly, canceling the adretizment is not related to the reputation of the program. probably the time of the program is not well enought for the advertizment program and also the age group. news program is mostly for retire people. However, perhaps the advertizment company wants to focuse on production suitable for the children such as shampoo. For example in "Tehran late night shows" in the past there was lots of advertizment about color people; this makes vewers angree since there was not any color in tehran. moreover, by advancing in the technology people care less and less about the magic box advertizment they choose othere ways of communication such as the internet, instant messaging and social website such as "Facebook". So if the adertizent company have no interest in TV does not means the program loos the viewers.
thridly, it is not acceptable to talk about this critical issue over just one year. perhaps in this mention year people immigrant to other country, not just this but also people may watch the similar program in other channel in the meantime.
In the conclusion, it is not sincble to gain conclusion from just little evidence. TVs should be more cution before change any program. and talk to all the viewers by questionnaries or skype interview, chack statistics in all tow to tree years and, negotiate to the advertizment company to understanding the main reason for cancling their advertizment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tizment program and also the age group. news program is mostly for retire people. Ho...
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...l website such as 'Facebook'. So if the adertizent company have no interest...
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...company have no interest in TV does not means the program loos the viewers. thridl...
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... more cution before change any program. and talk to all the viewers by questionnari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 391.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9820971867 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7806122483 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503836317136 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0200060243 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.70786347227 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255307800244 0.218282227539 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770614178782 0.0743258471296 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721797576584 0.0701772020484 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126968090375 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811678486495 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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