Since those issues of Newsbeat magazine that featured political news on their front cover were the poorest-selling issues over the past three years, the publisher of Newsbeat has recommended that the magazine curtail its emphasis on politics to focus more exclusively on economics and personal finance. She points to a recent survey of readers of general interest magazines that indicates greater reader interest in economic issues than in political ones. Newsbeat's editor, however, opposes the proposed shift in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive political coverage anymore.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
changing the type of magazine is a serious decision, and needs lots of information so author assumptions have lots of flawed such as, the one-time poorest-selling in the statistics cannot (It doesn’t mean) lead to anything, the way of gathering information was not included, and ¬¬last but not least, being among a few doesn’t mean you are going to sell more. cover the cost of the magazine.
Firstly, the author mentions that once they had the poor selling.how they figure out this is (not) due to the front cover, Perhaps the front cover was not enough eye-catching. For example, if you talk about the most exciting subject, and the front cover was not elegant.Therefore the people will not try to buy the magazine. This is a known fact that the people use the professional photographer to take their pictures also spend a huge amount of money on finding these people and deal with them. Not just this but also, the content is important too, readers do not buy magazines with boring or old- fashion news. Therefore it is very important to use the exciting stories which are why the head of the magazines always look for people who has broadened their horizons and think out of the box. It is a known fact anybody likes what his doing makes every effort and sacrifice needed for his success. So it is acceptable why people spend money on hiring professional. the content is much more important than the subject.
Secondly, how they conclude that people like the economics more than a political issue. Since economics is affected by the political matters. Moreover, who was the participant in the surveys? Are they ask enough people? Were they from different age group? Since people from different age group like different things. For example, the young people always keen on sports, on the other hand, the old people like gardening.
Thirdly, the number of magazines cannot guarantee the increase of selling rate. Since every newspaper have the page on political matters( the political matters. However, in my country, people spend all their times listening to radios and watching the news from all over the world. But in Japan, people like to work more and more.
In conclusion, changing or not changing the topic of the newspaper need a lot of attention. So people who like to change should be more realistic and pay attention to statistics, will not judge according to one-time selling, and think more about the content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64777051451 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.471057884232 637% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 73.4165163783 57.8364921388 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4347826087 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.70786347227 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156254414148 0.218282227539 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477300607491 0.0743258471296 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406206795891 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916511638495 0.128457276422 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053239595205 0.0628817314937 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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