I agree with the memorendum issued by manager od a telivision station. I am also a good follower of local news. I feel more comfaortable after getting to know about local news and weather forecast. It helps littile bit advance preperation about weather forecast. People can feel local news gives whats has happened in around the city and for tommrows forecast. It is really a good way to know our neighbourhood. Everybody is busy in daily routine. That is not going to change. In the night watching the good or bad news of our local. It is a good advantage for everybody.
As mentioned in the memoredum, about weather forecast of local news, whicch is really a good thing to know . If planning to go out for shopping, fun, or any other activities. We can orepare in advance for weather. Such as for rainy, windy, tornado warning, snow fall, flood alert, too hot weather. People can get prepared after gatting to know tommorow's weather situation. Otherwise, without preperation, they can just stuck in bad situation. It doesn't help specially kids. they are not used of thes situations. Weather forecast also helps in marketing of thing. If tomorrow's forecast shows. Its going to rain in summer. There is summer festival is going to open in the local. There will be food vendors. They need to prepare in advance for sales. They will prepare. But, they can bring foods with extra precautions. Thay will not bring everything for sell. Since, in rainy weather there are very minimal chances of crowd will come. They won't be able to sell a lot. It will affect there economy. Good to prepare in advance after getting the weather forecast for tomorrow. There will be minimal wastes. They can save for future sells. They can invest inn future and earn. As they earn, they can advetise during local news and wether forcast.
As mentioned by manager of telivision station, they are losing advertising revenues. Since, they were not running local news and weather forecast. They are going to restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level. Then, thewon't be able to loost advertising revenues. Ther will be addition in advertising revenuse. It would be good for both viewer and news station.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 40 15
No. of Words: 382 350
No. of Characters: 1768 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.628 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.368 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.55 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.647 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.233 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.318 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... am also a good follower of local news. I feel more comfaortable after getting to...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...ecast. People can feel local news gives whats has happened in around the city and for...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of local news, whicch is really a good thing to know . If planning to go out fo...
^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., whicch is really a good thing to know . If planning to go out for shopping, fun...
^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hey can just stuck in bad situation. It doesnt help specially kids. they are not used ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...tuation. It doesnt help specially kids. they are not used of thes situations. Weathe...
^^^^
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecast also helps in marketing of thing. If tomorrows forecast shows. Its going to ...
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Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... of thing. If tomorrows forecast shows. Its going to rain in summer. There is summe...
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Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...autions. Thay will not bring everything for sell. Since, in rainy weather there are very...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hay will not bring everything for sell. Since, in rainy weather there are very minima...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 914, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y weather there are very minimal chances of crowd will come. They wont be able to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, as for, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 379.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82585751979 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49977699836 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503957783641 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 4.96107784431 484% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 19.7664670659 207% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 9.0 22.8473053892 39% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1337667104 57.8364921388 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.6097560976 119.503703932 37% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.24390243902 23.324526521 40% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.36585365854 5.70786347227 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.67664670659 449% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172277133368 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431098659434 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657202119323 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154661915572 0.128457276422 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642690844718 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 14.3799401198 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 48.3550499002 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.197005988 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.96 12.5979740519 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 12.3882235529 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 11.1389221557 50% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.9071856287 50% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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